Posting over here because it's too hard to read with the threading over there.
Sup, guys! Updates to come soon, I just need some sleep so it won't come out looking like my idea of editing involved banging my head against a keyboard.
Wit Of The Staircase 75/?
anonymous
January 14 2011, 02:41:07 UTC
Matthew wasn't looking forward to going home. It was a battlefield between them, and he was honestly fed up. He was about ready to shake Al for being a jerk, and Arthur for being so tightly wound and letting Al get to him. But when he came in, everything was quiet. He couldn't hear the dull roar of Al listening to music on his mp3 player as he gamed and ignored his homework, or the sound of Arthur blaring classic British punk. In fact, it was too quiet. He found it a bit off, considering it hadn't been locked when he came in. Thinking that he'd seen this episode of that crime drama before, Matthew decided a walk was in order. Only after he was sure there wasn't a serial killer lurking around in there
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Wit Of The Staircase 76/?
anonymous
January 14 2011, 02:51:26 UTC
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Dinner went normally. Too normally, in fact. Arthur and Alfred were hardly lovey-dovey - Matthew would've questioned their sanity if they ever were. Yet there were little things between them. They weren't arguing for the moment, and Matthew was sure there was stuff going on under the table. He suspected it was hand holding and really hoped it wasn't all out handjobs, because that was more Francis' thing, and he really didn't need to get the mental image of his siblings doing that.It was later that he rapped lightly against Al's door. He could just hear the sound of Al's mp3 player, with some metal thing going so loud he probably couldn't hear a thing. Matthew opened the door and stepped in. He pulled off the headphones and pushed stop. Al only looked back for a moment
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Re: Wit Of The Staircase 76/?
anonymous
January 14 2011, 08:00:21 UTC
I'm so happy Arthur and Alfred are finally together :D And I'm so happy you updated. This is a great story and you have a great sense of flow. The slime mould line killed me.
Re: Wit Of The Staircase 76/?
anonymous
January 16 2011, 05:50:28 UTC
ANOOOOON YOU'RE BAAAACK! ♥
I love how the relationship is shifting - not just the cuddling instead of making out, but that Francis' whims now include teasing Matthew instead of groping him and making him embarrassed. Even the keep-away game has a completely different tone than the one with his cell phone way back in the day, and it's adorable. But Francis is still his pervy self, so yay not going too far in the other direction!
I'm very much in love with chill-but-protective!Alfred, and Francis + Jazz = win. (Nothing against Francis + Edith Piaf, but it's nice to see him enjoying something else too.)
Part 13-14 (edited), 15-65: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/15769.html?thread=41192345#t41192345
Posting over here because it's too hard to read with the threading over there.
Sup, guys! Updates to come soon, I just need some sleep so it won't come out looking like my idea of editing involved banging my head against a keyboard.
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Dinner went normally. Too normally, in fact. Arthur and Alfred were hardly lovey-dovey - Matthew would've questioned their sanity if they ever were. Yet there were little things between them. They weren't arguing for the moment, and Matthew was sure there was stuff going on under the table. He suspected it was hand holding and really hoped it wasn't all out handjobs, because that was more Francis' thing, and he really didn't need to get the mental image of his siblings doing that.It was later that he rapped lightly against Al's door. He could just hear the sound of Al's mp3 player, with some metal thing going so loud he probably couldn't hear a thing. Matthew opened the door and stepped in. He pulled off the headphones and pushed stop. Al only looked back for a moment ( ... )
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I saw the update on the fills list and I was like "No. Way!" And it WAS you!
Keep up the beautiful literature~! As I said, I'm so, so, so glad you're back!!!
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I love how the relationship is shifting - not just the cuddling instead of making out, but that Francis' whims now include teasing Matthew instead of groping him and making him embarrassed. Even the keep-away game has a completely different tone than the one with his cell phone way back in the day, and it's adorable. But Francis is still his pervy self, so yay not going too far in the other direction!
I'm very much in love with chill-but-protective!Alfred, and Francis + Jazz = win. (Nothing against Francis + Edith Piaf, but it's nice to see him enjoying something else too.)
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PPF5 list for the next parts, in case I don't get back before this fills up: http://hetalia-kink.livejournal.com/18772.html?thread=65442132#t65442132
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