Look at this Fucking Fill [1a/?]
anonymous
August 27 2010, 07:49:37 UTC
This is kind of a cross between the above prompt and another from part 14, which asks to base a story on the nations where their relationships have nothing to do with their cannon relationships (just to see how they get along based on personality alone). Eirik is Iceland and Nils is Norway - those seem to be among the most common fandom names so I just went with it. And we’re just gonna say that the drinking age in this pretend city is 18, or maybe the younger kids all have fakes. This will probably trace the next year in their lives - or at least the school year. Oh! And multiple fills are gold! I wanna see what you guys come up with. Do eet!
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AUGUSTAn extremely drunk guy with glasses and one of those annoying mustache finger tattoos hit the bar beside Natalia with a loud thud. “You...yuh...y’are smokin’ girl
( ... )
Look at this Fucking Fill [2d/?]
anonymous
August 28 2010, 11:14:13 UTC
Nils looked over to the person beside him in the dark space. The guy who lived here - what was his name again? All he could remember was that it started with an A. He was taking a swig of beer and leaning against a pole, eyes paying close attention to the proceedings despite the drunken glaze over them. Their eyes met; Nils gave a nod and a thumbs-up to the music, and the guy threw a fist up and let out a drunken roar that was barely heard over the cacophony despite its volume
( ... )
Look at this Fucking Fill [2f/?]
anonymous
August 28 2010, 11:16:54 UTC
Sadiq laughed and spilled his drink while throwing his arm toward Berwald. “You’re gay, aren’t you supposed to be getting tail like no one’s business? Thought that’s how the gays rolled.” He picked up his bottle, drew a hand through the beer on the table, and shook it out all over Mathias who whacked him upside the head in retaliation
( ... )
I feel like a lamer for always catching this so soon after you update, but I don't care ahhaha
Ace update, anon, I'm really loving this. Your dialogue flows very naturally and you actually keep them in character while making them gd hipsters at the same time -- which may or may not be difficult, I don't know, but either way its DEFINITELY appreciated.
It's hard to pick out my favorite bits, since I honestly love them all. The rollerskating/skateboarding part is definitely up there though. As for the characters, Belarus is completely fabulous and your France is totally spot on, which can be hard to do, evidently, as most write him over the top, or too stoic.
In the end, keep doing what you're doing, and you'll be sure to have won my heart by the end of this < 3
Eep OP you are awesome and I love comments and especially detailed comments and please continue to stalk and lrg[bhqrgo;a’ba SQUEE HERE HAVE SOME CRAPPY SKETCHES
Re: Sketchies!
anonymous
August 28 2010, 22:46:53 UTC
not op.
fuck you keep writing kick ass stuff like this here and I'll let you keep like six Francis....es...
Seriously everything that OP said is so true... but i want to add you are even more awesome because of Smart Poland... anything with Math smart Poland is amazing...
Author!anon
anonymous
August 30 2010, 02:06:02 UTC
To first!anon: Six Francis...es?! OMG BRAIN ASPLODE. Also, goodness I love myself some Smart!Poland. No one says you can't be smart and fabulous.
OP: :D :D :D :D WHAI SO AWESOME OP?! I'm kinda pumped to draw Austria and Norway now.
Though I'm afraid to say, Spain and France have some rocky times ahead. Just warning you. (BUT THEY ARE HOT, LIKE A BILLION DEGREES KELVIN HOT, THE HOTNESS CANNOT LEAVE FOR TOO LONG :D)
Hahaha well in that case...screwy scene-incest complicated relationships, go!
Re: Look at this Fucking Fill [2f/?]
anonymous
August 29 2010, 02:27:31 UTC
This fill is sensational.
There are so many lines that I love but I can't pick out properly because I have been awake the whole night.
Ahhh lot of this feels so familiar, how did I get so ooooold.
Gosh.
I need this fill like air so don't you think of stoppping it. Everyone is very fab.
And boards are cool but blades are too, sadly by now I look like grandma trying to drive a mountainbike on them. It takes me ages alone to get them on. My skate skills have reverted back to NON EXISTENT. Gosh.
author!anon
anonymous
August 30 2010, 01:56:28 UTC
:D thanks for the comment! I'm always all "are people even reading this?!" during fills >.>
AHAHAHAH STOPPING WUT AHAHAHAHA. I've got this thing lined out to NYE and then beyond that there's just a "Later" pile of stuff that will happen. A non-spoilery sample: Sweden shaves his beard and all of the sudden the entire world wants in his pants; Hjortdonner looks for a drummer; Alfred legally changes his name to Alfred Fucking Jones.
Man I was totally a rollerblader kid. Feel you on that one.
author!anon
anonymous
September 9 2010, 04:41:35 UTC
Meep so - Jens is Germania, Nils is Norway, and Tina is fem!Finland - I put it at the author's notes at the top of the chapters they first appeared in (so Nils is at the top of the first; Jens and Tina are at the top of this one).
Hmm, maybe I should announce those all big and bold and shiny instead of in a tiny A/N at the beginning.
>.>
<.<
Sorry for the confusion! And thanks for commenting :D
Look at this Fucking Fill [3a/?]
anonymous
August 30 2010, 03:38:07 UTC
All I gotta say is - Nils, what a punk ass you are!
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OCTOBERAlfred blearily poured himself some coffee and collapsed into his chair at the breakfast table. Ten A.M. classes - fuck that. He stuck his face down into his coffee mug and stared at his roommates over the top, their words not really making it to his brain quite yet
( ... )
LATFF [3c/?]
anonymous
August 30 2010, 03:40:28 UTC
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Nils looked up at the loud “Hey, frog!” that was yelled in the tiny clothing shop.
Arthur stomped over to Francis. “I have customers,” Francis glared when he got close.
Arthur shrugged. “Let’s take it out back - oi, you,” he nodded to Nils, “you work for this guy?” He jerked a thumb to Francis. Nils hummed in the positive and shot a glum look at Francis, which provoked a laugh from Arthur. “Well fuck me, small world
( ... )
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AUGUSTAn extremely drunk guy with glasses and one of those annoying mustache finger tattoos hit the bar beside Natalia with a loud thud. “You...yuh...y’are smokin’ girl ( ... )
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Ace update, anon, I'm really loving this. Your dialogue flows very naturally and you actually keep them in character while making them gd hipsters at the same time -- which may or may not be difficult, I don't know, but either way its DEFINITELY appreciated.
It's hard to pick out my favorite bits, since I honestly love them all. The rollerskating/skateboarding part is definitely up there though. As for the characters, Belarus is completely fabulous and your France is totally spot on, which can be hard to do, evidently, as most write him over the top, or too stoic.
In the end, keep doing what you're doing, and you'll be sure to have won my heart by the end of this < 3
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Prussia: http://tinypic.com/r/2412o9k/4
Why yes that is a tattoo of the Prussian eagle, what?
Poland: http://tinypic.com/r/2pq6yjd/4
Feliks is totally ready to take on Rocky Horror. Hey dude, just FYI, your tank top? It’s kinda see-through.
America: http://tinypic.com/r/33mn9rn/4
He has tattoos of whales. Very cute whales. Gil totally attempted to put an Iron Cross on his skateboard, too.
Ahahah I love Belarus. What a fierce bitch. And France - can I keep one in my closet, please? I'll take care of him, promise.
Question though - anyone in particular you'd like to see together? I should know before people start hooking up all over the place. O.o
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fuck you keep writing kick ass stuff like this here and I'll let you keep like six Francis....es...
Seriously everything that OP said is so true... but i want to add you are even more awesome because of Smart Poland... anything with Math smart Poland is amazing...
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AHHH THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL ART
YOU'RE A WONDERFUL PERSON HAHHAHA < 3
OH MAN.
AND TBH, THE ONLY PAIRING I AGGRESSIVELY SHIP IS FRANCExSPAIN,
BUT YOU CAN SHIP WHOEVER YOU'D LIKE IN THIS. IT'S ALL UP TO YOU.
ALL CAPS JUSTIFIED.
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OP: :D :D :D :D WHAI SO AWESOME OP?! I'm kinda pumped to draw Austria and Norway now.
Though I'm afraid to say, Spain and France have some rocky times ahead. Just warning you. (BUT THEY ARE HOT, LIKE A BILLION DEGREES KELVIN HOT, THE HOTNESS CANNOT LEAVE FOR TOO LONG :D)
Hahaha well in that case...screwy scene-incest complicated relationships, go!
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There are so many lines that I love but I can't pick out properly because I have been awake the whole night.
Ahhh lot of this feels so familiar, how did I get so ooooold.
Gosh.
I need this fill like air so don't you think of stoppping it.
Everyone is very fab.
And boards are cool but blades are too, sadly by now I look like grandma trying to drive a mountainbike on them. It takes me ages alone to get them on. My skate skills have reverted back to NON EXISTENT.
Gosh.
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AHAHAHAH STOPPING WUT AHAHAHAHA. I've got this thing lined out to NYE and then beyond that there's just a "Later" pile of stuff that will happen. A non-spoilery sample: Sweden shaves his beard and all of the sudden the entire world wants in his pants; Hjortdonner looks for a drummer; Alfred legally changes his name to Alfred Fucking Jones.
Man I was totally a rollerblader kid. Feel you on that one.
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Hmm, maybe I should announce those all big and bold and shiny instead of in a tiny A/N at the beginning.
>.>
<.<
Sorry for the confusion! And thanks for commenting :D
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OCTOBERAlfred blearily poured himself some coffee and collapsed into his chair at the breakfast table. Ten A.M. classes - fuck that. He stuck his face down into his coffee mug and stared at his roommates over the top, their words not really making it to his brain quite yet ( ... )
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“Mm, most of the time. It’s easier than you think, especially with that Trader Joe’s near downtown. They toss out all sorts of good things.”
Nils raised an eyebrow. “Really?”
Arthur nodded. “I’m going Wednesday, actually, if you want to come with. Just swing by my place around 9:30.”
“Okay,” Nils picked up his zines, placed them in his bag, and turned to go before Arthur’s voice stopped him.
“Oh yeah, The Scam is throwing a Halloween party, come by and bring your friends - tell ‘em all about it. Even that loud freak ‘o yours.”
“Oh God, Gilbert?” A blank look. “The pale one?”
“Yeah, that one. Seems like a proper hooligan.”
Nils snorted. “I don’t think he’s a proper anything - but I’ll let him know ( ... )
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Nils looked up at the loud “Hey, frog!” that was yelled in the tiny clothing shop.
Arthur stomped over to Francis. “I have customers,” Francis glared when he got close.
Arthur shrugged. “Let’s take it out back - oi, you,” he nodded to Nils, “you work for this guy?” He jerked a thumb to Francis. Nils hummed in the positive and shot a glum look at Francis, which provoked a laugh from Arthur. “Well fuck me, small world ( ... )
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