Look at this Fucking Fill [2f/?]
anonymous
August 28 2010, 11:16:54 UTC
Sadiq laughed and spilled his drink while throwing his arm toward Berwald. “You’re gay, aren’t you supposed to be getting tail like no one’s business? Thought that’s how the gays rolled.” He picked up his bottle, drew a hand through the beer on the table, and shook it out all over Mathias who whacked him upside the head in retaliation.
“He probably does,” Heracles lazily agreed. “Good at keeping a low profile, I guess?”
Berwald shifted in his seat. “Been single fer a’while.”
“High five!” Mathias shot at him.
Berwald smacked the hand in the air, but let out a “Not r’ly.”
Alonzo clapped him on the back. “You’re 21, my man. Get around a little!”
Berwald just shrugged.
“Okay, back to the original discussion ya dipshits,” Sadiq shouted. “Francis,” he pointed, “you’re saying you don’t sleep with someone new every week.”
Francis huffed and leaned back in his seat, supporting his elbow with his other hand. “No, do you think I’m a freshman in college, darling?”
“So then,” Alanzo smirked, “you like that Antonio guy a lot, huh?”
“He’s nice,” Francis agreed, tapping his bottle against the table, “though a bit uncultured.”
Mathias snorted. “I regret to inform you that you routinely hang out with the likes of us.” This earned a round of laughter from the table and a high-five from Sadiq.
“So is he your boyfriend?” Heracles asked.
Francis merely shrugged. “We haven’t discussed it.”
Mathias elbowed Sadiq; Sadiq threw a balled-up napkin at Francis and asked where Elizabeta was. “That woman is a badass,” was his only response to Alonzo’s laughing inquiry as to why it mattered.
“Three guesses: Arthur, Kiku, or Ludwig.”
“Ludwig?” Jens inquired.
Francis tilted his head toward him. “Just a university kid she’s taken a liking to.” There was a mutter from somewhere about how impossible it was that Francis knew so many people.
“And where’s your little lackey?” Mathias asked. Jens sighed.
“Roderich, you mean?” Francis asked.
“Yep, that one. Prissy shy one?”
“He has his own life you know. You just want to make the poor man as uncomfortable as utterly possible, anyway.”
“I like Roderich just fine,” Jens said, placing his head in his hand.
“Whoopie,” Sadiq twirled a finger, “the prissy dude. Get Eliza here, man.”
“Yeah,” Alonzo agreed.
“Okay, okay,” Francis dug out his phone, “but surely you know by now that none of you are likely to get in her pants.”
---
Antonio hit the sidewalk hard. Alfred laughed from his perch atop the half-pipe and moved his skateboard around with one foot. Gilbert yanked on a rollerblade and yelled “You’re getting rusty, old man! If you came to the skate park with us more often we wouldn’t have to laugh at your sorry ass every three minutes.”
Antonio smiled from the ground and laughingly replied “At least I don’t rollerblade!”
Alfred joined in “Yeah, better a terrible skateboarder than a great rollerblader,” and stuck his tongue out at Gilbert. He slid his oversize glasses up his sweaty nose and dropped down.
Gilbert frowned. “Ugh, fuck you guys.”
---
France. He knows eeeeveryone. So October will probably be similarly long (I mean, it’s Halloween, come on), and then things should calm down it should get shorter.
I feel like a lamer for always catching this so soon after you update, but I don't care ahhaha
Ace update, anon, I'm really loving this. Your dialogue flows very naturally and you actually keep them in character while making them gd hipsters at the same time -- which may or may not be difficult, I don't know, but either way its DEFINITELY appreciated.
It's hard to pick out my favorite bits, since I honestly love them all. The rollerskating/skateboarding part is definitely up there though. As for the characters, Belarus is completely fabulous and your France is totally spot on, which can be hard to do, evidently, as most write him over the top, or too stoic.
In the end, keep doing what you're doing, and you'll be sure to have won my heart by the end of this < 3
Eep OP you are awesome and I love comments and especially detailed comments and please continue to stalk and lrg[bhqrgo;a’ba SQUEE HERE HAVE SOME CRAPPY SKETCHES
Re: Sketchies!
anonymous
August 28 2010, 22:46:53 UTC
not op.
fuck you keep writing kick ass stuff like this here and I'll let you keep like six Francis....es...
Seriously everything that OP said is so true... but i want to add you are even more awesome because of Smart Poland... anything with Math smart Poland is amazing...
Author!anon
anonymous
August 30 2010, 02:06:02 UTC
To first!anon: Six Francis...es?! OMG BRAIN ASPLODE. Also, goodness I love myself some Smart!Poland. No one says you can't be smart and fabulous.
OP: :D :D :D :D WHAI SO AWESOME OP?! I'm kinda pumped to draw Austria and Norway now.
Though I'm afraid to say, Spain and France have some rocky times ahead. Just warning you. (BUT THEY ARE HOT, LIKE A BILLION DEGREES KELVIN HOT, THE HOTNESS CANNOT LEAVE FOR TOO LONG :D)
Hahaha well in that case...screwy scene-incest complicated relationships, go!
Re: Look at this Fucking Fill [2f/?]
anonymous
August 29 2010, 02:27:31 UTC
This fill is sensational.
There are so many lines that I love but I can't pick out properly because I have been awake the whole night.
Ahhh lot of this feels so familiar, how did I get so ooooold.
Gosh.
I need this fill like air so don't you think of stoppping it. Everyone is very fab.
And boards are cool but blades are too, sadly by now I look like grandma trying to drive a mountainbike on them. It takes me ages alone to get them on. My skate skills have reverted back to NON EXISTENT. Gosh.
author!anon
anonymous
August 30 2010, 01:56:28 UTC
:D thanks for the comment! I'm always all "are people even reading this?!" during fills >.>
AHAHAHAH STOPPING WUT AHAHAHAHA. I've got this thing lined out to NYE and then beyond that there's just a "Later" pile of stuff that will happen. A non-spoilery sample: Sweden shaves his beard and all of the sudden the entire world wants in his pants; Hjortdonner looks for a drummer; Alfred legally changes his name to Alfred Fucking Jones.
Man I was totally a rollerblader kid. Feel you on that one.
author!anon
anonymous
September 9 2010, 04:41:35 UTC
Meep so - Jens is Germania, Nils is Norway, and Tina is fem!Finland - I put it at the author's notes at the top of the chapters they first appeared in (so Nils is at the top of the first; Jens and Tina are at the top of this one).
Hmm, maybe I should announce those all big and bold and shiny instead of in a tiny A/N at the beginning.
>.>
<.<
Sorry for the confusion! And thanks for commenting :D
“He probably does,” Heracles lazily agreed. “Good at keeping a low profile, I guess?”
Berwald shifted in his seat. “Been single fer a’while.”
“High five!” Mathias shot at him.
Berwald smacked the hand in the air, but let out a “Not r’ly.”
Alonzo clapped him on the back. “You’re 21, my man. Get around a little!”
Berwald just shrugged.
“Okay, back to the original discussion ya dipshits,” Sadiq shouted. “Francis,” he pointed, “you’re saying you don’t sleep with someone new every week.”
Francis huffed and leaned back in his seat, supporting his elbow with his other hand. “No, do you think I’m a freshman in college, darling?”
“So then,” Alanzo smirked, “you like that Antonio guy a lot, huh?”
“He’s nice,” Francis agreed, tapping his bottle against the table, “though a bit uncultured.”
Mathias snorted. “I regret to inform you that you routinely hang out with the likes of us.” This earned a round of laughter from the table and a high-five from Sadiq.
“So is he your boyfriend?” Heracles asked.
Francis merely shrugged. “We haven’t discussed it.”
Mathias elbowed Sadiq; Sadiq threw a balled-up napkin at Francis and asked where Elizabeta was. “That woman is a badass,” was his only response to Alonzo’s laughing inquiry as to why it mattered.
“Three guesses: Arthur, Kiku, or Ludwig.”
“Ludwig?” Jens inquired.
Francis tilted his head toward him. “Just a university kid she’s taken a liking to.” There was a mutter from somewhere about how impossible it was that Francis knew so many people.
“And where’s your little lackey?” Mathias asked. Jens sighed.
“Roderich, you mean?” Francis asked.
“Yep, that one. Prissy shy one?”
“He has his own life you know. You just want to make the poor man as uncomfortable as utterly possible, anyway.”
“I like Roderich just fine,” Jens said, placing his head in his hand.
“Whoopie,” Sadiq twirled a finger, “the prissy dude. Get Eliza here, man.”
“Yeah,” Alonzo agreed.
“Okay, okay,” Francis dug out his phone, “but surely you know by now that none of you are likely to get in her pants.”
---
Antonio hit the sidewalk hard. Alfred laughed from his perch atop the half-pipe and moved his skateboard around with one foot. Gilbert yanked on a rollerblade and yelled “You’re getting rusty, old man! If you came to the skate park with us more often we wouldn’t have to laugh at your sorry ass every three minutes.”
Antonio smiled from the ground and laughingly replied “At least I don’t rollerblade!”
Alfred joined in “Yeah, better a terrible skateboarder than a great rollerblader,” and stuck his tongue out at Gilbert. He slid his oversize glasses up his sweaty nose and dropped down.
Gilbert frowned. “Ugh, fuck you guys.”
---
France. He knows eeeeveryone. So October will probably be similarly long (I mean, it’s Halloween, come on), and then things should calm down it should get shorter.
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Ace update, anon, I'm really loving this. Your dialogue flows very naturally and you actually keep them in character while making them gd hipsters at the same time -- which may or may not be difficult, I don't know, but either way its DEFINITELY appreciated.
It's hard to pick out my favorite bits, since I honestly love them all. The rollerskating/skateboarding part is definitely up there though. As for the characters, Belarus is completely fabulous and your France is totally spot on, which can be hard to do, evidently, as most write him over the top, or too stoic.
In the end, keep doing what you're doing, and you'll be sure to have won my heart by the end of this < 3
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Prussia: http://tinypic.com/r/2412o9k/4
Why yes that is a tattoo of the Prussian eagle, what?
Poland: http://tinypic.com/r/2pq6yjd/4
Feliks is totally ready to take on Rocky Horror. Hey dude, just FYI, your tank top? It’s kinda see-through.
America: http://tinypic.com/r/33mn9rn/4
He has tattoos of whales. Very cute whales. Gil totally attempted to put an Iron Cross on his skateboard, too.
Ahahah I love Belarus. What a fierce bitch. And France - can I keep one in my closet, please? I'll take care of him, promise.
Question though - anyone in particular you'd like to see together? I should know before people start hooking up all over the place. O.o
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fuck you keep writing kick ass stuff like this here and I'll let you keep like six Francis....es...
Seriously everything that OP said is so true... but i want to add you are even more awesome because of Smart Poland... anything with Math smart Poland is amazing...
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AHHH THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL ART
YOU'RE A WONDERFUL PERSON HAHHAHA < 3
OH MAN.
AND TBH, THE ONLY PAIRING I AGGRESSIVELY SHIP IS FRANCExSPAIN,
BUT YOU CAN SHIP WHOEVER YOU'D LIKE IN THIS. IT'S ALL UP TO YOU.
ALL CAPS JUSTIFIED.
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OP: :D :D :D :D WHAI SO AWESOME OP?! I'm kinda pumped to draw Austria and Norway now.
Though I'm afraid to say, Spain and France have some rocky times ahead. Just warning you. (BUT THEY ARE HOT, LIKE A BILLION DEGREES KELVIN HOT, THE HOTNESS CANNOT LEAVE FOR TOO LONG :D)
Hahaha well in that case...screwy scene-incest complicated relationships, go!
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There are so many lines that I love but I can't pick out properly because I have been awake the whole night.
Ahhh lot of this feels so familiar, how did I get so ooooold.
Gosh.
I need this fill like air so don't you think of stoppping it.
Everyone is very fab.
And boards are cool but blades are too, sadly by now I look like grandma trying to drive a mountainbike on them. It takes me ages alone to get them on. My skate skills have reverted back to NON EXISTENT.
Gosh.
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AHAHAHAH STOPPING WUT AHAHAHAHA. I've got this thing lined out to NYE and then beyond that there's just a "Later" pile of stuff that will happen. A non-spoilery sample: Sweden shaves his beard and all of the sudden the entire world wants in his pants; Hjortdonner looks for a drummer; Alfred legally changes his name to Alfred Fucking Jones.
Man I was totally a rollerblader kid. Feel you on that one.
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Hmm, maybe I should announce those all big and bold and shiny instead of in a tiny A/N at the beginning.
>.>
<.<
Sorry for the confusion! And thanks for commenting :D
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