[b.a.p] circular logic

Jul 28, 2013 23:20

Who: Himchan, Jongup
What: 3400w, PG
Summary: Sometimes Jongup is inexplicable and Himchan does things that don't make any sense, but it doesn't matter if they both end up on the same page anyway.

For trope bingo 'fake relationship'~ Please blind-eye my timeline. ;u;

he's never been too good with words )

member: jongup, group: b.a.p, pairing: himup, member: himchan

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chiharu July 28 2013, 13:25:28 UTC
spot!

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chiharu July 28 2013, 17:21:26 UTC
JooOOOooo I love your voice for Jongup!!! ;___; I really miss reading B.A.P fic and this brings such a smile to my face!

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haneyon August 2 2013, 11:42:39 UTC
/whispers come back to b.a.p when you have the time ♥♥♥ junhong miss you~ °∇°

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almostblue July 28 2013, 14:18:58 UTC
Jongup watches him go like a human unhappy-go-round-an angry little rollercoaster, one for kids with funny caterpillar heads on the front cars. most hilarious brain image ever, omg. ALSO: TRUE.

"But you've never had a boyfriend, hyung?" Junhong asks innocently. Jongup makes a mental note to remind him later: do not encourage the stupid, ranting hyungs. Sometimes Junhong needs to be told these things. TINIEST JUNHONG. I LOVE HIM. DO NOT ENCOURGE HYUNG'S RANTING.

Jongup pops his 3DS back open. Youngjae looks up. Pokémon midi notes fill the room. Himchan sighs happily, closing his eyes.

OH MY GOD. JONGUP JUST SHIFTING OVER ON THE COUCH I LOVE HIM. HIMCHAN'S HAPPY SIGH. JONGUP DOES NOT DO YOUR STUPID WORDS, HUMAN.

He's shit at the process and is just being obtuse, but Jongup likes it. Jongup is himself quite regularly obtuse.

When he kisses Himchan back, he likes the way he knows Himchan likes the way Jongup tastes like fresh coffee.

COFFEE KISSES OMG

Jongup wonders if Himchan's sleep talking. He does that sometimes. (Jongup ( ... )

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haneyon August 2 2013, 12:33:44 UTC
JONGUP DOES NOT DO YOUR STUPID WORDS, HUMAN. PRETTY MUCH lmfao. idk i kinda felt like part of the challenge of writing him was that half his ~thing is just... physical? HE DOESN'T SAY MUCH (THOUGH HE CAN). but it's kind of hard to write judging looks and stupid faces haha... "orz

COFFEE KISSESSSS... and, just. himchan being good with his tongue lmao. u___u; i mean wat YOU LIKING THIS JONGUP VOICE MAKES ME SO HAPPY, I CAN'T-? since it came out of that conversation with you and rrroeblinggg in the first place~♥

ontology recapitulates phylogeny LAUGHING, oh you. xDD but thank you so much seriously (you managed to make the structure match the voice HAPPY SCREAMING ;AAA; ♥) ahhh i can't even tHIS COMMENT-

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haneyon August 2 2013, 11:53:40 UTC
it's definitely been a while!! but ahh~ *u* ♥ i'm so glad you felt jongup's 4Dness here, because for the longest time every time i tried to write him it just... idk, didn't really feel right somehow? xD so relieved you think this style worked. ;u; thank youuu!

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akmongs July 28 2013, 22:32:51 UTC
omg i was in love with this from ????? the beginning ???????
and then i fell in love with it harder and harder this was actually perfect Damn.It it's such a spot-on, accurate and believable characterization, not only of himup & their relationship, which was totally cute btw, but of every member (i loved youngjae especially) ((and the smug dickface jung daehyun)) (((DAEJAE AT THE END I SEE YOU))) i also like how you throw in real events that actually happened since it's a canon au
the conversations have that kind of rapid flow that makes them even more hilarious and comic, which is actually a pretty hard result to get but you achieve it, like, every time, and the way you portray the band dynamics is
f l a w l e s s

himchan being all self-conscious about himself and jongup returning his feelings sighs @ the adorable dumb hyung

some of the parts i liked the most:

Jongup says to the Pokémon trainer on his screen, "I don't really like girls." that was so fucKING CUTE I SWEAR
"No thanks… I don't really like elephants ( ... )

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haneyon August 2 2013, 12:24:59 UTC
wahhh!! THANK YOU FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT TT________TT *noms on your adorable spazzing* ♥♥ ahaha i can never help sticking daejae cameos in everywhere, they're too fun~ xDD i'm glad you liked them as well!! (somehow i always make dae a dickface though... /WORST HABIT)

i really enjoyed threading the IRL events together...! kind of like join the dots, though i suck at that lmao. xDD but you yOU YOUUU~!! ;O; and thanks for letting me know the bits you liked too!! i read this comment like 50 times, so happy~ /cries //dumbest

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥!!

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tyreling July 29 2013, 07:00:56 UTC
o m g this is really good. Jongpuppy, your words, your finishing line gdi you're so cute.

And Himchan, your Himchan is always so amusing.

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haneyon August 2 2013, 12:34:31 UTC
himchan is totally my favourite idiot forever, ehehe~♥ *u* thank youuu! i'm glad you liked it!! :D :D

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