[b.a.p] circular logic

Jul 28, 2013 23:20

Who: Himchan, Jongup
What: 3400w, PG
Summary: Sometimes Jongup is inexplicable and Himchan does things that don't make any sense, but it doesn't matter if they both end up on the same page anyway.

For trope bingo 'fake relationship'~ Please blind-eye my timeline. ;u;

he's never been too good with words )

member: jongup, group: b.a.p, pairing: himup, member: himchan

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akmongs July 28 2013, 22:32:51 UTC
omg i was in love with this from ????? the beginning ???????
and then i fell in love with it harder and harder this was actually perfect Damn.It it's such a spot-on, accurate and believable characterization, not only of himup & their relationship, which was totally cute btw, but of every member (i loved youngjae especially) ((and the smug dickface jung daehyun)) (((DAEJAE AT THE END I SEE YOU))) i also like how you throw in real events that actually happened since it's a canon au
the conversations have that kind of rapid flow that makes them even more hilarious and comic, which is actually a pretty hard result to get but you achieve it, like, every time, and the way you portray the band dynamics is
f l a w l e s s

himchan being all self-conscious about himself and jongup returning his feelings sighs @ the adorable dumb hyung

some of the parts i liked the most:

Jongup says to the Pokémon trainer on his screen, "I don't really like girls." that was so fucKING CUTE I SWEAR

"No thanks… I don't really like elephants."

Himchan frowns. Puts his phone down on the table. "That's not a very nice thing to say, Jongup-ah. I'm not that fat anymore." i legit laughed like an idiot at this oh my g-

He's shit at the process and is just being obtuse, but Jongup likes it. Jongup is himself quite regularly obtuse. idk why i really loved this line i found it so sweet

that was more of a spazzing than a comment /i'm sorry/
i'm whipped

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haneyon August 2 2013, 12:24:59 UTC
wahhh!! THANK YOU FOR SUCH A LOVELY COMMENT TT________TT *noms on your adorable spazzing* ♥♥ ahaha i can never help sticking daejae cameos in everywhere, they're too fun~ xDD i'm glad you liked them as well!! (somehow i always make dae a dickface though... /WORST HABIT)

i really enjoyed threading the IRL events together...! kind of like join the dots, though i suck at that lmao. xDD but you yOU YOUUU~!! ;O; and thanks for letting me know the bits you liked too!! i read this comment like 50 times, so happy~ /cries //dumbest

♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥!!

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