HSN Exchange Fic: There's No Secrets This Year, for bluejbird

[gleefics_exch]

Title: There’s No Secrets This Year
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Finn
Warnings: D/s thing going on
Word count: 1275
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox Television.
Summary: It’s not

Comments

[andbless_mybaby]

Oooh, anon, this was delicious. I never realized that I had a thing for Finn dressed up in lingerie until I read this story, lol. The touch of D/S in their interaction hit just the right note. Your Puck was also very in-character. I liked this a lot. ♥

[auchic]

Thank you! Finn in panties was the first thing I thought of when I saw the prompt, and I just couldn't get it out of my head!

The touch of D/S in their interaction hit just the right note.

Oh, that's good. I tried to make it subtle and believable. And yay that Puck was in-character! He was very difficult to write.

Thanks for responding! Also, thanks to you and bklyangel for hosting a great exchange!

[dontwannapanic]

This was super hot and sort of angsty and guh WHY are you doing this to me?

"They lay there, waiting until their breath comes back. Finn could fall asleep like this, messy and wet and crushed under his best friend, but he won’t. Because Puck won’t like that."
This killed me, anon. It's like a cuddle but not. Finn wants it to be a cuddle so bad.

♥ I love this and I love your Puck.

[auchic]

I like angsty, what can I say? Though I hardly write it because I love my happy endings. Ah well.

Awesome! I'm glad you like this. Thanks for reading and the nice things you said.

[bluejbird]

Oh writer, thank you so much! This completely surpassed my expectations and I'm not sure how to comment without flailing and copying all of the lines back at you.

Thank you for writing Finn/Puck- I OTP them a ridiculous amount and I love the way you've written them here. The sex is incredibly hot in this and I love how descriptively you write, so that it really conjures up a mental picture. Also I'm really weird about the level of D/s I like and I don't know how you did it but you hit it on the head perfectly. I love the dynamic between them, the way Finn loves having Puck control him.

Finn’s sloppy at giving blowjobs - he sucks on the head, stroking the shaft - but he’s better than before. I loved this line a lot because it's so very Finn. And seriously, the idea of Finn in green lingerie- emerald green even, which is a detail I love so much especially how he can't tell the difference- is incredibly hot. Thank you for that wonderful mental image! :) And the last line is fantastic (and makes me want more

[auchic]

Sorry I am so late responding, but I was out of town right when this was posted and then I hate responding anonymously.

Thank you for writing Finn/Puck- I OTP them a ridiculous amount and I love the way you've written them here.

*sigh of relief* That makes me happy. I was so nervous, because I've never written Glee slash and I wasn't really a Finn girl (am now, have been converted), so I wanted to make this awesome

NOW FOR THE SRS BNS!

[becca_radcgg]

YOU ARE AWESOME and not just 'cause of that thing that time in the place, m'kay! Seriously, I've read this a few times now and DAMN. Like really. You know how when you read something again and your opinion TOTALLY changes. That's kinda how I feel about this. Like in my first read I totally missed out on the epic awesomeness of your phrasings.

It’s hot out, even though it’s late, the kind of heat that sticks to your skin, and the silk sticks with it.
GUH! BB, you start it off right, and good, and hot. No lie. I love this line so much. Something about the fact that the heat is the focal point and then bringing in the sticky silk to lie all the pieces together. It's a beautifully elegant turn-of-phrase.

Finn’s sloppy at giving blowjobs - he sucks on the head, stroking the shaft - but he’s better than before. Practice makes perfect, like with singing or football or Spanish class. Puck lets him practice a lot. Finn’s really good at making Puck moan and swear, but he was even good at that when all they did was jerk off. THIS

Re: NOW FOR THE SRS BNS!

[auchic]

The icon says it all, babe.

Re: NOW FOR THE SRS BNS!

[becca_radcgg]

*clings*

[auchic]

for some reason, i love the idea of finn in lingerie because he's so huge and awkward

Yeah, I was totally thinking this too, and it made me laugh, but it made me think, and then plotbunnies took over and holy cow this happened.

I'm really glad you read too! Thanks!