HSN Exchange Fic: There's No Secrets This Year, for bluejbird

Aug 17, 2010 09:22

Title: There’s No Secrets This Year
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Finn
Warnings: D/s thing going on
Word count: 1275
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox Television.
Summary: It’s not ( Read more... )

! hot summer nights fic exchange, rating: nc 17, character: finn hudson, pairing: finn/puck, author: auchic, character: puck

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abluegirl August 19 2010, 01:16:40 UTC
This story is seriously hot. It is short, but man, is it ever intense. The dynamic you have set up here between Puck and Finn is one of palitable tension, and I can feel how badly Finn wants it. This is dirty, and hot, and excellent. Good job, anon.

Puck steps further into the room, and Finn can see his eyes flashing. “Yeah, you do,” he spits out.
I mean god, that is totally not explicit but it is so freaking hot. The meaning and intent behind those words... NGH. Well played, author, well played.

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auchic August 27 2010, 23:56:03 UTC
I kinda hate how short this is, but really, I think it works well after all. I found it very hard to find a Finn voice and that made writing this interesting. I'm glad you found it hot though. That's the biggest thing I was trying for ;)

The dynamic you have set up here between Puck and Finn is one of palitable tension, and I can feel how badly Finn wants it.

Oh good. Like I said, finding the Finn voice was massively hard, and so I was really hoping his need would show through. And apparently it did! Sweet! Thanks for reading this and enjoying it!

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auchic August 27 2010, 23:56:57 UTC
Awesome! I'm glad you loved it. Thanks for reading!

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fuzzy_paint August 20 2010, 19:06:50 UTC
So this? Pretty hot, if I do say so myself. I love how you set the scene right away with the heat and the sweat and Finn in emerald green panties. I'm gonna admit that this is my absolutely favorite thing. You've taken something I've never really given much though before (especially for this pairing) and convinced me of how scorching it could be.

The elements of d/s were well done and I especially love the hints of defiance from Finn. He wants to wear some silk underwear? He's going to wear some silk underwear and convince Puck of how much he likes it My interpretation is probably completely off base, but it also makes me wonder who's really going to end up in control as this relationship/friends with benefits/whatever they are develops in the future.

Puck lets him practice a lot. LOL, how generous of Puck. I think you did wonderfully with both of their characterizations and this was wonderful! ♥

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auchic August 28 2010, 00:02:34 UTC
Finn in emerald green panties. I'm gonna admit that this is my absolutely favorite thing.

Hee. It popped into my head as soon as I read the prompt and I was lost forever. I'm glad you thought it was hot, because I was all worried about it being "Cross dressing, lulz" and of course that was not the way I wanted this to go. Maybe another pairing, but I wanted this to be hot.

My interpretation is probably completely off base, but it also makes me wonder who's really going to end up in control as this relationship/friends with benefits/whatever they are develops in the future.

YAY YOU GOT IT! This was seriously seriously the hardest thing for me, because I wanted it to be subtle, and I wasn't sure if it would come through! And Puck is totally manipulatable (that's not a word, but I'm making it one).

Thanks for reading and liking and commenting! You rock.

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cruiscin_lan September 11 2010, 14:46:12 UTC
Boy, you really grabbed my attention with the first paragraph. Guess I'm just easily enticed by the image of Finn Hudson in ladies' panties, and I have you to thank for opening my eyes to that fact!

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