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HSN Exchange Fic: There's No Secrets This Year, for bluejbird

Aug 17, 2010 09:22

Title: There’s No Secrets This Year
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Finn
Warnings: D/s thing going on
Word count: 1275
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox Television.
Summary: It’s not ( Read more... )

! hot summer nights fic exchange, rating: nc 17, character: finn hudson, pairing: finn/puck, author: auchic, character: puck

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NOW FOR THE SRS BNS! becca_radcgg August 17 2010, 23:35:03 UTC

YOU ARE AWESOME and not just 'cause of that thing that time in the place, m'kay! Seriously, I've read this a few times now and DAMN. Like really. You know how when you read something again and your opinion TOTALLY changes. That's kinda how I feel about this. Like in my first read I totally missed out on the epic awesomeness of your phrasings.

It’s hot out, even though it’s late, the kind of heat that sticks to your skin, and the silk sticks with it.
GUH! BB, you start it off right, and good, and hot. No lie. I love this line so much. Something about the fact that the heat is the focal point and then bringing in the sticky silk to lie all the pieces together. It's a beautifully elegant turn-of-phrase.

Finn’s sloppy at giving blowjobs - he sucks on the head, stroking the shaft - but he’s better than before. Practice makes perfect, like with singing or football or Spanish class. Puck lets him practice a lot. Finn’s really good at making Puck moan and swear, but he was even good at that when all they did was jerk off.
THIS ENTIRE PARAGRAPH is made of WIN! SO MUCH WIN! The sloppiness and the mechanics and the practice. GUH GUH GUH! Seriously. And then the SPANISH CLASS! SO FINN! And the idea of the practicing. UNF!

*shivers*

It tightens in the crease of his thigh and it hurts, pinching and pulling. Then the head of Puck’s cock is against his hole, pressing, and it burns, hurts worse than the elastic, and doesn’t at the same time.
And he doesn't take off the panties. Ummmm WOW! Just WOW. Little detail of the pinching and pulling and SO MUCH POWER behind it. Then the burning and oh GEEZ! You're amazing.

Tee hee hee. Mirror!

Seriously, anon... your epic talent will not be denied!

♥ ♥ ♥

Re: NOW FOR THE SRS BNS! auchic August 27 2010, 23:46:10 UTC

The icon says it all, babe.

Re: NOW FOR THE SRS BNS! becca_radcgg August 28 2010, 00:05:49 UTC

*clings*

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