HSN Exchange Fic: There's No Secrets This Year, for bluejbird

[gleefics_exch]

Title: There’s No Secrets This Year
Rating: NC-17
Pairings/Characters: Puck/Finn
Warnings: D/s thing going on
Word count: 1275
Disclaimer: This Glee fanfiction is based upon the television show of the same name. All characters and situations other than my own are sole property of Ryan Murphy Productions and 20th Century Fox Television.
Summary: It’s not

Comments

[bluejbird]

Oh writer, thank you so much! This completely surpassed my expectations and I'm not sure how to comment without flailing and copying all of the lines back at you.

Thank you for writing Finn/Puck- I OTP them a ridiculous amount and I love the way you've written them here. The sex is incredibly hot in this and I love how descriptively you write, so that it really conjures up a mental picture. Also I'm really weird about the level of D/s I like and I don't know how you did it but you hit it on the head perfectly. I love the dynamic between them, the way Finn loves having Puck control him.

Finn’s sloppy at giving blowjobs - he sucks on the head, stroking the shaft - but he’s better than before. I loved this line a lot because it's so very Finn. And seriously, the idea of Finn in green lingerie- emerald green even, which is a detail I love so much especially how he can't tell the difference- is incredibly hot. Thank you for that wonderful mental image! :) And the last line is fantastic (and makes me want more!)

Also I feel like I've had an added bonus- I went to check out the song you used for your title and lyrics, and it's fantastic- thank you for introducing me to it!

Um, basically, thank you so much for writing this for me. I really do love it so very much. ♥♥♥

[auchic]

Sorry I am so late responding, but I was out of town right when this was posted and then I hate responding anonymously.

Thank you for writing Finn/Puck- I OTP them a ridiculous amount and I love the way you've written them here.

*sigh of relief* That makes me happy. I was so nervous, because I've never written Glee slash and I wasn't really a Finn girl (am now, have been converted), so I wanted to make this awesome.

I wasn't sure about the D/s, because you had said no hardcore BDSM, but I tried to take the dynamic from their canon friendship and put it to use here. Puck has a very dominant personality, but Finn really holds the reins, so to speak.

I'll tell you a secret: Finn's lingerie colour came from a camisole I own. I don't know what made me picture it, but once it was there, it was there for good.

Yay for another SSP conversion! Once I figured out the plot, that song popped into my head and the lyrics were just so perfect, I had to use them.

I'm so happy you enjoyed reading this! I had a lot of fun writing this and thank you for your lovely comments.