finally... i wrote again...

Feb 17, 2004 11:50

Title: Different on the outside
Rating: mild NC-17
Pairing: Benji/Joel (implied Benji/Billy)
Summary: The three of us go to the bus stop together laughing and joking the whole way there but as soon as the corner comes into sight you walk away not wanting to be seen with freaks. For being so similar, for being twins we’re so different.Notes~ yes I ( Read more... )

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jcslilprincess February 17 2004, 23:03:46 UTC
Aww! that was so cute! I'm glad you got out of your writing slump! I hope everything's going well for you :)

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riotangelstar February 18 2004, 00:27:24 UTC
that was wondrful. I love how it was kinda different. :)

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xopen_firex February 18 2004, 04:15:32 UTC
Hehe, I liked it a lot. And I love your icon. :D

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ex_tidalwav February 18 2004, 05:28:25 UTC
Awwhhh! That was too sweet! You should write more to this! Even if you don't, great job!

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wonderful jaded_hopeless February 18 2004, 06:22:08 UTC
That was fabulous. That feels like such a generic review, but I can't think of a better way to put it! favorite bit:

"I soon felt your mouth latch on to my collar bone leaving deep purple marks and little red imprints of teeth; I was yours."

It made me tear up, I swear!

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