Comments | foreveryours311: finally... i wrote again...

foreveryours311

finally... i wrote again...

Feb 17, 2004 11:50

Title: Different on the outside
Rating: mild NC-17
Pairing: Benji/Joel (implied Benji/Billy)
Summary: The three of us go to the bus stop together laughing and joking the whole way there but as soon as the corner comes into sight you walk away not wanting to be seen with freaks. For being so similar, for being twins we’re so different.Notes~ yes I ( Read more... )

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krazybaby128 February 18 2004, 16:38:05 UTC

that was...so beautiful...i love it.

_noisenkisses_ February 22 2004, 11:04:26 UTC

Wow that was so....*searches for word* .....*doesn't find it*....well it was so that! I really enjoyed reading this, I was a bit dissapointed at first when I thought it was going to be one of those pining love stories where one of thems cool and accepted and the other isn't and it's all so "woe is me" but I loved that you didn't do it that way. The fight was important, I was really impressed with the way you handled that. It was very cool that he pierced his nipple... just really shows how connected they'll always be no matter who they grow up into. Loved this and love youuu. I've added you if that's okay?

Re: foreveryours311 February 22 2004, 16:59:57 UTC

Awww glad you liked and of course you can add me. Yeah i did want to make a you're cool, i'm not..But i love you even though its wrong..lets fuck tyoe story story... yeah there were more things i wanted to say in response to this but i cant think of them right now because they would sound really stupid...what ever this review made me feel loved...
Much love
stace

thestreetlights February 24 2004, 00:52:00 UTC

That was very beautiful. I loved it. Great job.

defy_darkness March 14 2004, 20:56:57 UTC

SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Great. That's the most 'o's I've ever given anyone...but they are definately justified here...glad I stumbled across this one. Just fucking beautiful.
~jenn

endless_crazy July 1 2005, 07:46:19 UTC

Holy crap! I don't know how I missed this. I have a jock/freak fetish and this hit the figurative jock/freak fetish spot! This part was pretty awesome.

Sometimes you would glance over at me I don’t think you saw me I think it was that you could just sense me.

I think I lurve you.

wasted_faith July 1 2005, 12:25:21 UTC

I see you got here before me! Now you see why this has stuck with me for so long and I absolutely had to find it again? I love it.

*ADDS TO MEMORIES FOREVER*

endless_crazy July 1 2005, 19:14:24 UTC

Holy crap I know. *Prints out story and keeps it under her pillow*