finally... i wrote again...

[foreveryours311]

Title: Different on the outside
Rating: mild NC-17
Pairing: Benji/Joel (implied Benji/Billy)
Summary: The three of us go to the bus stop together laughing and joking the whole way there but as soon as the corner comes into sight you walk away not wanting to be seen with freaks. For being so similar, for being twins we’re so different.Notes~ yes I

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[heartstar]

that was absolutely wonderful! Wow, I loved it!

[fallensilent]

That was really sweet, I love they way they took a little bit of each other. It was so sweet!

"As you looked into my eyes I saw the real you, I saw deep in your chocolate eyes an apology. Before you could open your mouth I said it was ok, and leaned in letting my pierced lips meet your pampered ones."
^ I loved that bit! Such a contrast + wow <3

[badaddiction]

I haven't actually had time to read a fic in a long time.
So I'm quite pleased that, when I only had time to read one, I chose this one.
You did an excellent job. I didn't feel at all contrived the way many of the other fics I've read about first-times have fallen. I like it that they never said "I love you". It somehow made it more realistic.

[maddymadden]

THAT...*sighs*...was gorgeous...I really loved this.

[elasticknights]

that was lovely. much like your icon. i love that guy.

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[foreveryours311]

i was about to say the same about your icon.... he is beautiful..

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[elasticknights]

oh i know, i think he's the most beautiful person ever.

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[foreveryours311]

(again loving your icon...) and agreeed with you he is the most beautiful person ever, for some reason his features remind me of angel... i dont know why.. and the hair of course...