"Following Orders" [Edward Elric; Roy Mustang; Alphonse Elric; Riza Hawkeye || Teen]

[evil_little_dog]

Title: Following Orders
Artist/Author: evil_little_dog
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Language, mentions of situational violence, child exploitation.
Prompt: I'd love to see something going wrong during a lead for the Philosopher's Stone or some other kind of military operation, and Ed's the one who gets hurt because of it, leading Mustang to realize (again) the

Comments

[elasg]

Ah! Something with some length to read!

I should comment more on these pieces, but I just so prefer longer stuff!

This is great, though you've left me hoping there will be lots more to this - and that you will answer the questions that everyone has (me included) about what Ed stumbled into!

[evil_little_dog]

Hee, I consider this a finished piece. :D

Though I do know what happened to Ed, and someday, maybe, there will be a story with what actually happened to Ed when he was investigating Cloyes.

[gaia_lulia]

Man, I wish for more of this. :)

I appreciated that you had Winry and Pinako show up. And there was some nice angst from Mustang.

[evil_little_dog]

I think the line forms on the right for "more of this". *nod*

Of course Winry and Pinako were going to show up. Now you know why I was nattering on about that a couple of weeks ago.

[gaia_lulia]

To be clear, I'd still prefer more Devotion. But I take what I can get on the angst front. :)

I noticed that, yes. :) For the record, when I wrote that unfinished Ed!Torture fic, Winry got called. Not Pinako, but that's because they were kind of trying to keep things on the down-lo. Winry didn't get told what happened until she got there.

[evil_little_dog]

Mmm, Devotion. I really want to get back to that. And Marking Time. Mmm. Well, you know, I do like angst, myself.

I might like to see that story one day. Even if it is unfinished.

[seta_suzume]

Very entertaining!

[evil_little_dog]

Thank you!