"Following Orders" [Edward Elric; Roy Mustang; Alphonse Elric; Riza Hawkeye || Teen]

[evil_little_dog]

Title: Following Orders
Artist/Author: evil_little_dog
Rating: Teen
Warnings: Language, mentions of situational violence, child exploitation.
Prompt: I'd love to see something going wrong during a lead for the Philosopher's Stone or some other kind of military operation, and Ed's the one who gets hurt because of it, leading Mustang to realize (again) the

Comments

[gaia_lulia]

Man, I wish for more of this. :)

I appreciated that you had Winry and Pinako show up. And there was some nice angst from Mustang.

[evil_little_dog]

I think the line forms on the right for "more of this". *nod*

Of course Winry and Pinako were going to show up. Now you know why I was nattering on about that a couple of weeks ago.

[gaia_lulia]

To be clear, I'd still prefer more Devotion. But I take what I can get on the angst front. :)

I noticed that, yes. :) For the record, when I wrote that unfinished Ed!Torture fic, Winry got called. Not Pinako, but that's because they were kind of trying to keep things on the down-lo. Winry didn't get told what happened until she got there.

[evil_little_dog]

Mmm, Devotion. I really want to get back to that. And Marking Time. Mmm. Well, you know, I do like angst, myself.

I might like to see that story one day. Even if it is unfinished.

[gaia_lulia]

I'm glad to hear that. :D

I'm sure sometime I'll have a really bad day and/or get stuck in the airport being rerouted to Korea and then I'll finish it. I don't like to see things languish indefinitely. I'm a finisher. A finisher of things. That get finished.

I should probably go make dinner; I'm starting to get a bit punchy.

[evil_little_dog]

You go make dinner, I'll fight with mine, as I think I overheated myself and shouldn't have eaten anything.