I read this at work, but I couldn't comment... silly school, blocking LJ...
Again, amazing job with this scene. I like getting to know Hannah more, and I think you did a great job of portraying her andintroducing her friend. You spent a good amount of time describing Denni (I loved Blue thinking he'd seen her chat about boys and do hair at the same time... that sentence flowed very nicely and made me laugh), but by using the yin/yang idea, you really spent an equal amount of time describing Hannah, because she's the opposite of everything Denni is
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holding my breath
anonymous
December 12 2008, 16:58:25 UTC
Nice to see more of Hannah's character and really enjoyed the description of her friend and how she felt about her. Found myself holding my breath as I read this. Good job in getting us all to be right there with them. Is there going to be more?
That's the sound . . .twsvanthwanabeJanuary 12 2009, 03:29:39 UTC
Stop! Listen. Can you hear it. That's the sound of Life's turn signal. That sound notifies everyone in the vehicle that Life is about to turn and change directions, brace yourself
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Again, amazing job with this scene. I like getting to know Hannah more, and I think you did a great job of portraying her andintroducing her friend. You spent a good amount of time describing Denni (I loved Blue thinking he'd seen her chat about boys and do hair at the same time... that sentence flowed very nicely and made me laugh), but by using the yin/yang idea, you really spent an equal amount of time describing Hannah, because she's the opposite of everything Denni is ( ... )
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