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THE ANONYMOUS WRITING FEEDBACK MEME -
(Untitled)
Drabbles by Ex Throughout the Month of June
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twenty-four.
twenty-four.
one hundred and seventy-four words.
you're not alone, you see? there's Loneliness standing beside you.
It's just one of those feelings. One that greets you as you wake and laughs as you frown. Sooyoung sighs and knows that today will be one of those days. One where nothing makes sense and nothings make sense. One where she'll see the ( Read more... ) -
twenty-three.
twenty-three.
one hundred and fifty two words.
sing like the world can hear you (I hear you, I hear you)
There's always something distinctively wrong about lipsyncing. Tiffany always blinks, breathes, and thinks, "My dream was to sing-" and her soul always cries out that it was never her dream to open her mouth and let nothing flow out. It hits her as ( Read more... ) -
twenty-two.
twenty-two.
two hundred and twenty-six words.
one day, you'll be a star (one day, we'll be stars)
As Krystal rests her head on her arms, chair pushed back and legs bent beneath the seat of the chair, she lazily clicks play once more. The beat is unfamiliar, the voices ones she has never heard before, but she still smiles and thinks (as the mysterious ( Read more... ) -
twenty-one.
twenty-one.
??? words
look into the mirror; who do you see?
With every line Yuri makes down her arm, she thinks, 'This will make me perfect.'
She always does it meticulously - there is no room for error. She will not be one of those idol suicide cases. She will be one of those happy girl group members, one who greets fans no matter the ( Read more... ) -
twenty.
twenty.
??? words.
forget me, forget you -- forgotten. [3/8: Yoon A]
[ Today is a new day. ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 11:52:34 am
Received: 07/14/09
[ Do you ever think about me? ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 1:13:42 am
Received: 07/14/09
“Unnie!”
Jessica looked up, her eyes leaving the soft yellow petals of the flower which she had crouched before. Her ( Read more... ) -
nineteen.
nineteen.
four hundred and eighty words.
broken clocks and things like now.
Don’t tell anyone, but Seohyun is scared of the future.
Tonight is one of the group’s rare nights off, and the members - (besides Taeyeon, who is never home, even on their so-called nights off because the leader never gets a night off) - are layered on the couch sloppily, ( Read more... ) -
eighteen.
eighteen.
eight hundred and seventy words.
forget me, forget you -- forgotten. [2/8: Hyoyeon]
[ What are you doing today? ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 12:41:17 pm
Received: 07/13/09
[ Do you even know? ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 12:41:25 pm
Received: 07/13/09
“Jessica.”
Jessica looked up, her eyes shining as she nodded. Yes? She urged the voice to ( Read more... ) -
seventeen.
seventeen.
six hundred and seventy-two words.
forget me, forget you -- forgotten. [1/8: Seohyun]
[ Do you remember who I am? ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 11:46:16 am
Received: 07/12/09
Jessica's breath escaped her in the form of a sigh as she arched her back, her fingers intertwined and her arms held tense above her head, stretching. Her window was open ( Read more... )