eighteen.

[exxelerate]

eighteen.
eight hundred and seventy words.
forget me, forget you -- forgotten. [2/8: Hyoyeon]

[ What are you doing today? ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 12:41:17 pm
Received: 07/13/09

[ Do you even know? ]
Sender: (no name)
Received: 12:41:25 pm
Received: 07/13/09

“Jessica.”

Jessica looked up, her eyes shining as she nodded. Yes? She urged the voice to

Comments

[raplaplacp]

I'm curious now as to who she can't talk to.
This one was so sad. I feel sorry for HyoYeon.
can't wait for the next chapter I wonder which member it'll be.:)

[exxelerate]

:D i wonder too. *slapped*

[just_keep_on]

askdjfh;klajsdfjasfljkas jasdfljasdflj FUCK. I need. Freakin a.

I cannot express anything right now.

You make me pouty. Give me a few minutes to bring back coherence and not feel like my heart is breaking.

[exxelerate]

COME BAAAAACK 8|

[just_keep_on]

Back. My heart still aches.

1. The texts. The text break my heart, especially since I *think* I know who it is from the last one, but I’m not sure, so I’ll just settle for my heart breaking ;___;
2. as if it were a gem which had been found in its purest of states and had not been sanded-down yet. That is an amazing way to describe Hyoyeon’s voice. Because her voice really does has that kind of quality; it’s interesting, being able to pick out her voice, actually.
3. She could not understand why, but Jessica felt comforted by the voice - as if it had lulled her from nightmares before and as if it had cared for her in the past. But it hadn’t. Had it? Oh crap, I started quoting lines - I’m going to end up freakin quoting the whole thing crappppp. But this line. I love how it shows that it’s Hyoyeon and also shows a hint of Jessica’s confusion. The earlier chapter made it seem like she was completely oblivious to her memory loss; here we have hints that maybe she does know something is wrong

[just_keep_on]

WHY IS MY COMMENT SO LONG HOLY CRAP

[thenexmessiah]

now i really wanna know what's wrong with Jessica. D: and who the person is that's not supposed to talk to her. DD:
i feel kinda bad for Hyoyeon. :( i'll probably end up feeling bad for all the members :D
this was excellent and i can't wait for more. ^_^

[darkaslay]

I'm assuming if it's JeTi biased then the person who's sending the messages is Tiffany? Or that just might be me hoping it's Tiffany.

I was just as sad as Hyoyeon when Jessica forgot about their conversation. *le sigh* But it's awesome at the same time because I love it when I can actually feel what the character's feeling.

[pineapple_rabu]

Damn, I wrote up a comment, but I saw this one and had to agree. xD

I'm thinking there was a traumatic experience involving JeTi while in the band, and Jessica came down with a disorder of some sort, either causing them to disband or after they already disbanded. Or, this could be totally wrong, haha.

As sad as this is, the details are beautiful, and I love it. I can't wait to see the other encounters. <3

[exxelerate]

:> maybe. i still haven't decided whether this place in an au or not ^^** LOL I FAIL SO MUCH.

[pineapple_rabu]

LOL! Well, you still have time to decide, really. I mean, it's still pretty obscure with plot, although we know that something is wrong with poor Jessica.

I want to steal our icon~

durr hurr my brain is broken

[xhappyegg]

srsly my brain is like... pfft.
I can't think of anything to say, except, WHOA.
And now my retarded 13 year old mind is trying to figure out what happened to Sica.

I really like how you italicize dialogue. I've never seen anyone do that, so I'm... amazed? Myabe that's not the right word, I durno, I just know I really like it. Ahaha.

I've a feeling the person she can't talk to is Tiffany, which might be why Tiffany will be written last. idk. my mind can't think.

wai you do this to me, olly? T_T