{collab} - [Code Geass]: "Learning Curve" (shameless Suzu/Lulu porn that NOW HAS A TITLE)

[kill_me_faster]

The result of a collab between hopechan and I that somehow spawned in the comment threads of her other hawt porn fic that you should all go read. (That's right, even if you don't like het porn, you should READ IT ANYWAY.) :P Anyway, my overall opinion is that this is actually pretty hot, but that my contributions were useless and drunk and full of fail.

Comments

[kill_me_faster]

You know, actually, I was going to call it "Learning Curve" until I flashed back to my FMA days and...who's was it? Harukami's? fic with the same name. OOPS.

[nayami]

I shall interrupt your crack comment spam to comment. XD So while I find Suzaku's voice off in some places, I have to say I found myself truly relishing this fic. I very rarely review smut fics because there's almost nothing to really view, and most hardly deserve one. But yours combined so many different elements -- hot first times, chess, math metaphors, hinting at lelouch's hesitation around suzaku about the zero thing and sexy underwear back-story -- that it kept me intrigued all the way through. And I admit, I found myself begging for that smut, not out of boredom no but because it was so enticing and teasing and hell I was right up there with Lelouch at times. Awkward. The smut was amazing, hinting at all of the insanity and intricacies that make up the boy's relationship. I love the inclusion of Ore!Suzaku, and I love how you can see Suzaku dancing between the two but still being very much true to the friendship when it most counts. I'll have to say that was my favorite part because as much as I love violence and angst, love

[kill_me_faster]

Don't worry, you're not interrupting anything important. XD I actually had to go to work anyway which ended our EPIC COMMENT RUN which has probably been known to exceed 100 in some cases. *headtilt* Now that I think about it.

BUT ANYWAY. I am so totally happy that you decided to leave a review on this raunchy ol' smut fic because BOY ARE YOUR REVIEWS THE BEST. ^___^ I love them so much; I always do a little squee whenever I see one in my inbox. I wish I were as competent at leaving them; alas, my STOOPID on the Intarwebz is probably pretty legendary by now.

At any rate, I'm really glad you thought this senseless, shameless porn had substance, because it was so much fun to write that it would be a shame if it weren't rewarding to read, too. But really, I'd have to say that most of the credit goes to Hope anyway because a.) she pretty much wrote all of the porn while I dithered around in the background BEING DRUNK writing narrative, AND B.) she's totally got the Lulu's-character thing down pat. ^__________^;; COME TO THINK OF IT, I

[realms_of_life]

OMG, chess metaphors, Suzaku, Lulu and chessboard. I LOVE THIS FANDOM. I congratulate you. Seriously. I love how Lelouch is such a complete, clueless virgin and for a moment there I really thought he was going to have an aneurysm, which only made things even better. This fic is just lovely and cute, notwithstanding the roughness of it all.I really enjoyed what you made with those two. Please, right more. :-)

[kill_me_faster]

You know, it's actually Hope that writes Lulu best, whereas I just try desperately to keep up. ^___^;; I don't think I've read a single Geass fic of hers where I haven't loved her Lulu.

I guess if I have to take credit for something...eh, I was the one who started the chess thing? *shrug* So there's always that, I suppose. XD

And only Lelouch would have an aneurysm over sex. *facepalm*

[realms_of_life]

LOL! Still good. :D I congratulate you both. Seriously. Jenn - whoever she is - is a really lucky girl.

Yeah, he totally would have an aneurysm over sex. Especially first!time gay sex with Suzaku. I'm positive of that. XD

[kill_me_faster]

Hahahaha, actually, what's funny is, the dedication to Jenn is actually pretty ironic. XD Because Jenn hates porn fics. They probably do, as a matter of fact, give her ANEURYSMS. Heh.

Jenn's LJ name is cephiedvariable, by the way. Feel free to troll her Livejournal, by all means. ♥ Our friendship is apparently very epic?

[seedsandstars]

shit, this is like, some of the hottest smut i've ever read, regardless of fandom. GODDAMN! fucking incredible job.

[kill_me_faster]

I dunno about Hope, but that is the greatest compliment I have ever received so thank you. ^_______^

[seedsandstars]

:"D! just keep writing pleasee!

[strike_x_slash]

IAWTC.

[runesque]

My, oh my XD. I have to agree with the previous commenters about it being smut with substance. Double entendres (intentional/uninentional?), witty banters, PUNS (can't look at "rise over run" the same way now), adequate measure of canon, and Lelouch being a classic English rich boy ("Ah. *swallows* Ah." being my favourite XDDD). I don't know about Suzaku's IC-ness but his lines are so entertaining and giggle-inducing and TRUE that I tossed all doubts out the window and enjoyed the ride for what it is. Also appreciated the no-frills, realistic sex (I actually blinked and missed it -_-) - less is more and your less is very sexy indeed.

A bit of useless side note: I went through 9,885 or 9,889 or 9,881 words whilst slurping on a glass of very acqueous yoghurt and inappropriate though it may sound, I enjoyed every minute of it XDDDD. I have to reread it (maybe in parts) to discern which part is it you wrote while intoxicated but DO GET DRUNK MORE OFTEN <3.

[runesque]

I'm slow sometimes so... You authored "War, Or Maybe A Game"??? No wonder these two carry similar... scents XDD. You like your Lelouchs frustrated and your Suzakus cheeky, smug and streetswise, don't you? You and kill_me_faster, er, Ms. Demi? actually make some originality in this small but glorious fandom - it could be a ficcing brand XD.

Now to memory this <3.

[kill_me_faster]

No no no, I have yet to write anything cheeky or original, ahaha. ^__^;; Oh, and really, "Ms." Demi is hardly necessary. 'Demi' in general is actually an old fandom name that I tried to discard, but since Hope a lot of people still call me that, I guess it's as good of a name as any. I wouldn't even care about online pseudonyms at all if I didn't hate my RL name so much, ahahha.

You know, maybe I'm looking in the wrong places, but I think I have yet to see BAD fic for this fandom. O.o And your fanart is just lovely. ♥