{collab} - [Code Geass]: "Learning Curve" (shameless Suzu/Lulu porn that NOW HAS A TITLE)

Aug 27, 2007 22:55

The result of a collab between hopechan and I that somehow spawned in the comment threads of her other hawt porn fic that you should all go read. (That's right, even if you don't like het porn, you should READ IT ANYWAY.) :P Anyway, my overall opinion is that this is actually pretty hot, but that my contributions were useless and drunk and full of fail. ( Read more... )

collab with hope!, smut, fanfic, code geass, suzu/lulu is hawt

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fuelboysamsonne August 30 2007, 07:32:39 UTC
i don't really do this...but ZOMFG DAMN YOUR FIC WAS AWESOME. the length of it is just mindblowing lol. i love the characterization of Lulu, it's spot on! i always thought that Lulu would be the seme... you guys proved me wrong hahaha :P the chessboard and chess metaphors were just pure genius. thanks for ruining chess for me lol... i'll never ever look at a chessboard in the same way again. XD please don't ever stop writing? this fic OWNS<3

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fuelboysamsonne August 31 2007, 09:40:06 UTC
hahaha! i totally agree, Lulu is all about theory and not so much on experience. i bet he's read about sex lol.

'and also, anyone who thinks that a cape and giant overdramatic arm gestures are that damn cool has never gotten laid in his life.'

lol! Lulu just loves being dramatic, doesn't he? i bet he thinks that Zero is the coolest thing ever. how... dorky.

i'm just wondering whether Lulu can look at, or even play chess properly ever again? he's totally Suzaku's bitch lol.

oh, i definitely don't mind having more stuff ruined :P if that means you guys would write more fics, it's absolutely a sacrifice worth making! :)

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kill_me_faster August 31 2007, 00:11:17 UTC
HOPE LOVES RUINING THINGS FOR PEOPLE, JUST SO YOU KNOW. *recalls the X-BUSTER incident with no small measure of petulance*

You know, at first I was actually REALLY EMBARRASSED about how long this was but the more people who comment on it and seem to like it, the better I feel about it. ^___^ It's good to know that reading almost 10,000 words of porn feels as short and enjoyable as WRITING almost 10,000 words of porn. :D

Lulu is only seme if someone is feeling sorry for him and LETS him, rawr. >D

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kanasaii August 30 2007, 09:39:36 UTC
I hate to admit but... like how Lelouch is a clueless virgin,
I'm...actually a clueless fanfic reader.

I don't know much about fanfics, formats, how it happens, how do you write them, how does one enjoy such stories what not, yada the whole deal!!! I am AS CLUELESS AS LELOUCH IS AS A VIRGIN. LOLX.

BUT. Seeing the above comments from others. good god,
I think it i just read some insane 9000++ word count ... smut (?) of awesome-ness?

If i start from here, where do i go to read more that can top such awesome standard of a fic? XD XD XD

(Sorry if I sounded weird and.... bits and pieces) D:

My comments on the fic:
I like how Lelouch plays up to his character from the official series and the possiblility of him acting like with wierd whimpers and tone of voice because of the situation in hand is (i feel) SUPER WELL-THOUGHT AND ACCURATE.

[QUOTE]"Very informative," he breathes.[/QUOTE ( ... )

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kill_me_faster August 31 2007, 08:27:09 UTC
*laugh* If this is your first time reading fic, then I'm sure there's definitely something better than over 9,000 words of porn, ahahah.

And don't worry, your review wasn't weird at all. ^__^ It was positively lovely and I adored it.

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keele_san August 30 2007, 13:11:57 UTC
I am at a loss for words. You can't say that this is just smut... (yes it is but.. still) It's made of pure win and awesome!

I couldn't get over the fact that Lulu was characterized SO well in this fic. I felt a little out of it with Suzaku's characterization but as I continued reading his being in character meshed in anyway (for me)

And as everyone says, the metaphors, chess, and math, and THE SILK PANTSU! Just made it <3

Please say there's a sequel... *hint hint* seme vengeful!Lulu :3

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kill_me_faster August 31 2007, 08:32:04 UTC
XDDDDDDDD I'm glad everyone liked the underwear bit. And I'm glad that you liked this fic, too, considering I at least was just flying by the seat of my pants the entire time.

(Any blame for piss-poor characterization is probably because of me. D: My bad. But Hope has always written awesome Lulu. ♥ I shall rely on this on future collabs to come.)

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equivalent_t September 3 2007, 08:09:10 UTC
Oh my god.

I think this is seriously the best smutfic I'd ever read, I mean, I usually don't even read smutfics. They're boring, even the 'good' ones. But you really wrote it so much right I can't imagine why anyone would not read it after the first two paragraphs for serious. The chess. The calculus. The banter. Lelouch's trainwreck train of thoughts. Wow.

Also, on Suzaku's ICness : This sounds like a badfic response, but honestly and I mean this as a 100% compliment, I don't think anybody cares. WHY SHOULD WE CARE ABOUT GETTING CANCER WHEN IT'S SO GOOOOOOOOD.

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kill_me_faster September 3 2007, 16:18:53 UTC
Hee, thanks. ^___^ I've always tried to make my smut interesting by throwing in things like dialogue and stream-of-consciousness. Because, uh, yeah, porn is boring. >__>

Also, re: your last statement - I lol'd. XD I wish I had that "It's cancer" manga scan from Lolicon Half-Year now...

♥ I love you.

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equivalent_t September 4 2007, 18:27:52 UTC
"It's cancer" manga? Heh, I only speak truth.

Thank you for rolling out such a nice fic. I'd forgotten that pr0n is supposed to be fun. ♥

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kill_me_faster September 4 2007, 23:04:30 UTC
It's actually not a manga ABOUT cancer, but instead about a guy who goes around raeping lolis because he HAS cancer. The story itself is actually terrible and it's the most offensive thing on the planet short of babyfuck, but the entire thing opens up with this panel of a doctor with this poker face on and he's just like, "...It's cancer". For some reason, I found it hilarious.

Porn IS fun! I'd kind of forgotten that, too. All my other fandoms were like blah blah blah waaaaangsty!sex, so it was fun to have Hope beat me into doing something lighter. Ahhh, all credit must go to her~~~

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tigtogtag September 8 2007, 15:59:15 UTC
This has been sort of an ongoing fic project for me.

When I first started to read, I was unfortunately ripped away without being able to finish. Then I came back to it later and got a little further.

And here I am, finally finished with...well, um, guh.

I can't describe it but it's wonderful and addictive and it gave me chills and butterflies and GUH.

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tigtogtag September 8 2007, 16:01:37 UTC
I also really appreciate the strange surprise of having an LMAO moment in the middle of reading smut. There's something about Lelouch wearing girls' underwear for his own comfort that is so incredibly In Character.

I don't read a lot of smut that has that delightful little twist to it.

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kill_me_faster September 18 2007, 02:41:01 UTC
The ONLY type of moment to have while reading smut is an LOL one! :D

Also, sorry this ridiculously late reply. O.o Apparently this comment never appeared in my inbox. Regardless, I am pleased greatly that you enjoyed this. ^__^

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