The result of a collab between
hopechan and I that somehow spawned in the comment threads of her
other hawt porn fic that you should all go read. (That's right, even if you don't like het porn, you should READ IT ANYWAY.) :P Anyway, my overall opinion is that this is actually pretty hot, but that my contributions were useless and drunk and full of fail.
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I had to print this porn -or else I'd never finish- and it's like, 30 pages long! D:
I bet it's worth more than the ink it cost me to print it!
*goes off to read*
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Anyway, I couldn't stop reading this fanfiction =3 Like the others already said... it was always interesting and much more than you would expect from a smutfic (and yeah, it's over ninethouuuuuusaaaaaaaaaaaaaaand %D )!
Um, Suzaku seemed a bit off to me, because he was such an awful tease and he didn't give me that impression in canon, but well, you never know. XD I loved the way you guys (girls, more likely :D ) wrote everything, it just had style and was even fun to read (which of course isn't necessary with smutfics, but nonetheless great if the author/s manage to pull it off!) . I love it, when porn isn't just porn, but the character interactions stand out or the dialogues fit. =3 And it's hard to not let dialogue or humor distract from the smutty flow, I bet.
Suzaku/Lelouch FTW <3 ! I'm really amused and amazed by your Lelouch, his way of thinking seemed so canon... well, I guess, that's what should ( ... )
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i'm so sick and tired of dumbass fangirls who can't write jack (like seriously? where in the hell did they learn to write?!) and who are too prude to write a goddamn hardcore yaoi! shit!
this was such a breath of fresh air, I love it. and you XD *hugs*
I've read the other one too and I loves it too WRITE MORE or i shall harm you physically muaha! >:3
loves!
Keichan
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