The result of a collab between
hopechan and I that somehow spawned in the comment threads of her
other hawt porn fic that you should all go read. (That's right, even if you don't like het porn, you should READ IT ANYWAY.) :P Anyway, my overall opinion is that this is actually pretty hot, but that my contributions were useless and drunk and full of fail.
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I think this is seriously the best smutfic I'd ever read, I mean, I usually don't even read smutfics. They're boring, even the 'good' ones. But you really wrote it so much right I can't imagine why anyone would not read it after the first two paragraphs for serious. The chess. The calculus. The banter. Lelouch's trainwreck train of thoughts. Wow.
Also, on Suzaku's ICness : This sounds like a badfic response, but honestly and I mean this as a 100% compliment, I don't think anybody cares. WHY SHOULD WE CARE ABOUT GETTING CANCER WHEN IT'S SO GOOOOOOOOD.
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Also, re: your last statement - I lol'd. XD I wish I had that "It's cancer" manga scan from Lolicon Half-Year now...
♥ I love you.
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Thank you for rolling out such a nice fic. I'd forgotten that pr0n is supposed to be fun. ♥
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Porn IS fun! I'd kind of forgotten that, too. All my other fandoms were like blah blah blah waaaaangsty!sex, so it was fun to have Hope beat me into doing something lighter. Ahhh, all credit must go to her~~~
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DON'T I KNOW. And when it's not wangsty it's dark and distuuuuuuuurbing (or supposedly!) or True Love Consummation! and it's like gods why am I reading this again. And I think we---general we---put too much attention on explaining how the other party is desirable or risque. Which is sort of silly. If we don't find the involved parties sexy, why then re we reading the fic?
Far be it from me to analyze pr0n, though. I don't read them that much anyway.
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IC porn are often wangsty or all powerplay-centric which is um maybe not that IC but it usually counts. I prefer this kind, actually. Or just go cute and cuddly so I don't have to spend much brainspace visualing what's going on due to Heavy Prose.
.........the problem, it seems, is that Fandom in general reads too many harlequins. I also get turned off, just in case it's not already obvious.
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Also, haha, if you could read what I was reading/actively searching for in the past few days, you might understand my state of mind. And it just sort of hits that emotionally frantic spot not many English fics manage to hit, you know? Not my pairing, but hot is hot, sexy is sexy, and IC can jump off a building for all I care.
Re 'Oh my God' : I'm simply very impressed. And damn, it feels nice to be very impressed and giggling like a 16 year old again when fic was fun instead of, I don't know, intellectually appealing? I missed that. So want to hug the author for that. *heart*
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This comment intrigues me and I wish I could read foreign languages so I could see how foreign fanfic differs from English fanfic. D:
And by that I mean, uh, SORRY FOR INTERRUPTING. O.o
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The distinctive feature of Japanese pr0n is the sounds. Very noisy. In speech brackets. Seldom refers to the penis directly, it doesn't work when it does because the language is hilarious like that. And the way Japanese is structure it's more convenient to....how do I put this?....go into 'what they're thinking/feeling' more than 'what they're doing' while still doing both? Unless you're doing actual hentai, in which case, it's often 'what they're doing' because J!Fanboys are weird.
...I can't believe I just wrote that. And also, what's interruption, comment thread threesomes are very fine. :D
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...that was hilarious. *laugh*
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