{collab} - [Code Geass]: "Learning Curve" (shameless Suzu/Lulu porn that NOW HAS A TITLE)

[kill_me_faster]

The result of a collab between hopechan and I that somehow spawned in the comment threads of her other hawt porn fic that you should all go read. (That's right, even if you don't like het porn, you should READ IT ANYWAY.) :P Anyway, my overall opinion is that this is actually pretty hot, but that my contributions were useless and drunk and full of fail.

Comments

[nayami]

I shall interrupt your crack comment spam to comment. XD So while I find Suzaku's voice off in some places, I have to say I found myself truly relishing this fic. I very rarely review smut fics because there's almost nothing to really view, and most hardly deserve one. But yours combined so many different elements -- hot first times, chess, math metaphors, hinting at lelouch's hesitation around suzaku about the zero thing and sexy underwear back-story -- that it kept me intrigued all the way through. And I admit, I found myself begging for that smut, not out of boredom no but because it was so enticing and teasing and hell I was right up there with Lelouch at times. Awkward. The smut was amazing, hinting at all of the insanity and intricacies that make up the boy's relationship. I love the inclusion of Ore!Suzaku, and I love how you can see Suzaku dancing between the two but still being very much true to the friendship when it most counts. I'll have to say that was my favorite part because as much as I love violence and angst, love gets to me in a way neither can.

But above all, the thing I must commend this fic for is Lelouch's voice. I would have never thought it could be handled so well in a smutfic. It's not pathetic or overly girly but comes off very close to what I imagine Lelouch might be like, given the bizarre situation. There is no pretense of Zero here to add the edge Lelouch occasionally gains. Yet you can still see him struggling to stay on top. Figuratively speaking. Overall, entire thing from start to finish was incredibly satisfying. Thank you for delivering a smutfic with substance.

[kill_me_faster]

Don't worry, you're not interrupting anything important. XD I actually had to go to work anyway which ended our EPIC COMMENT RUN which has probably been known to exceed 100 in some cases. *headtilt* Now that I think about it.

BUT ANYWAY. I am so totally happy that you decided to leave a review on this raunchy ol' smut fic because BOY ARE YOUR REVIEWS THE BEST. ^___^ I love them so much; I always do a little squee whenever I see one in my inbox. I wish I were as competent at leaving them; alas, my STOOPID on the Intarwebz is probably pretty legendary by now.

At any rate, I'm really glad you thought this senseless, shameless porn had substance, because it was so much fun to write that it would be a shame if it weren't rewarding to read, too. But really, I'd have to say that most of the credit goes to Hope anyway because a.) she pretty much wrote all of the porn while I dithered around in the background BEING DRUNK writing narrative, AND B.) she's totally got the Lulu's-character thing down pat. ^__________^;; COME TO THINK OF IT, I CAN'T REALLY SAY I CONTRIBUTED AT ALL. OOPS.

Still, I'm glad you thought this almost-10,000 words of porn was a worthy read. Even if I mostly failed at it, I'M STILL GOING TO TAKE JOY IN THAT FACT ANYWAY LIKE A MOOCH. ♥ *dansu*

Also unfortunately despite his efforts Lelouch got PWNED XD