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dorkery

FIC: Hither Lies Our Fated Way

Dec 31, 2010 15:50

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c: n.italy, c: austria, c: spain, g: so srs, oc, porn, long historical, g: sex!, c: malaya, c: portugal, f: hetalia, p: austria/spain, g: woobie, notes, habsburgs, c: s.italy, r: nc-17, c: turkey

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myfuckinglestat September 21 2011, 21:39:28 UTC

mmm this comment is as late as it can be ( ... )

dorkery September 21 2011, 21:57:40 UTC

omg you actually commented though ;A;

I'm so happy that you took the time to plot out what you liked about the story! I did want to give the characters more dimension and tried my best to make them act in a manner befitting the actual history of the nations they represent without compromising their personalities, and I am very happy that you think it worked. :)

I think one thing I wanted to consistently depict was that these two were teenagers on top of the world at that point in time, without much regard to consequence because, as experienced as they are, their personal decisions are also hampered by the emotionality and idiocy of teens (because seriously, we're idiots when we're teenagers). I also think (which I believe is reflected in Austria's character) that the nations are very in advisor roles to their leaders because their suggestions, while generally the best decisions in the long term, can easily be ignored for political purposes ( ... )

dorkery September 21 2011, 21:58:47 UTC

Also hahahaha I never considered the fact that Spain was sweet on Romano because the Pope lived there. Thanks for giving me something to think about!

myfuckinglestat September 21 2011, 22:11:08 UTC

Well yeah! I've already read Smoke and Ashes, but there wasn't comment box so I couldn't review it...but yeah I love it! God that final scene was so dramatic, like Prussia is so well behaved and so down to earth, until that moment when they want to kill her and she's like exploding (I never loved her more) on everyones faces!! this was like a return from the deaths scene I was like OMG ºAº and to think that her rage was like Germany's true punishment...

Also I came to love Russia a lot, many fics picture him as mean to Prussia, but I liked how seet he was with her...ok creppy but sweet if you read between the lines <3 now that I think about it he was the only one with a squint of a happy ending XD

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dorkery July 1 2012, 03:39:04 UTC

HELLO READER ANON! I am so pleased you have found your way and did enjoy this story. It's been a long time since I returned to this and I side-eye this fic as one of my first forays into fandom... but still was fun to write all the same.

What did you like most about it? :)