How's My Driving?

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[Character Name] Rose Tyler
[Canon] Doctor Who
[Point Taken from Canon] Just after Partners in crime

[Age] 25
[Gender] Female
[Sexual Orientation] Heterosexual

[Eye Color] Hazel
[Hair Color] Blonde
[Height] 5'6
[Clothing] Typically, jeans, a shirt, and some sort of bomber jacket.

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[Player name] Emmy
[Age] 19
[Personal Journal]  emmynine
[Other characters currently played] Not Applicable

[Character name] Rose Marion Tyler
[Age] 25
[Canon] Doctor Who
[Point in time taken from canon] Just after the Partners in Crime sighting

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