Another Master and Slave thing snippet

Oct 13, 2011 07:12

Haha, influenced by lucathia-rykatu's style here, and I wanted to try to write a fairy tale-ish type narrative for this anyway. :3


*on the first sentence* ommmmmmg, why are you doing this to meeeeeee?? They don't look that different from humans?! So I could technically have three threads going on at once? *cry*

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original: master and slave thing, writing: nanowrimo, writing, fandom: original fiction

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lucathia_rykatu October 13 2011, 07:10:56 UTC
They don't look that different from humans?!
*wonders what you mean*

They were nearly indistinguishable from humans,
OOOOooooh, so the geists are nearly indistinguishable from humans? Didn't think you were going down that route!

Hm, from the description of how they leave behind a living husk... does that mean there are these kind of people who've been attacked around? ): Soulless people?

Little children's - yes, including you, so take care that you check every person to make sure they aren't a geist when you to speak with them.
Would make for a scary bedtime story... made even scarier since the geists are out there. How numerous are the geists?

The Gods sent down a psyven imbued with the power to fight the geists to assist the warrior.
So they're from the Gods? :3

Huh. I was intending to go for storybook format, not storyteller format. Ah well. XD;;
The story teller even hoped you'd have sweet dreams. XD

Have you settled on the names for the masters and slaves as these ones? :3

Plus, Aldran's kinda like an angel then? XDDD ( ... )

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darkicedragon October 13 2011, 09:03:17 UTC
"OOOOooooh, so the geists are nearly indistinguishable from humans? Didn't think you were going down that route!"
*cry* Neither did I! I was hoping for hollows from Bleach! Big mean monsters that make a nice big target and are labelled 'evil instinctual monter', not intellectual ones that are hard to tell apart from humans and can communicate with humans and - and - and - ;________;

"does that mean there are these kind of people who've been attacked around? ): Soulless people?"
Yuuup. :( I think I've found out how people know if there's a geist skulking around - they find the body. D: Not sure if the people who are attacked basically sit there or if they do move around, just...not energetically and don't really respond to people. Or maybe they do respond but they're kinda empty. D ( ... )

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lucathia_rykatu October 14 2011, 04:34:58 UTC
Now it's a lot less clear cut, since the geists don't look all that different. What's to say they're completely unlike humans? (And are there possibly any half geists...?)

What do people do with the victims of geists? That might stir up a lot of arguments and conflicts, since people probably have different views?

Not clans/nests of them?
What, what? Now you make me think geists are organized and intelligent.

(Waugh, secondary main character who doesn't remember anything! *facepalm* At least he hasn't lost them? *headdesk*)
XDDDD So he'll be almost a blank slate then? But not completely oblivious? He didn't seem too oblivious in your drabbles to the prompts I threw at you.

Haha, you wrote a summary already! It's a very cool summary. XD

This doesn't look like it was based that much on a master and slave scenario anymore, does it? XD
Lol, not very. XD; It's sure evolved a lot.

Aw, poor him; he's a battery. XD;;
Battery, hm, battery... XD;;; That reminds me of this manga! XD;;

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darkicedragon October 14 2011, 14:37:07 UTC
"What's to say they're completely unlike humans? (And are there possibly any half geists...?)"
Haha...ha ha...ha..... Don't know about the half-geists (yet) but there's definite intelligence in some of them. *spoilers* Enough to have arguments with and hold proper conversations. *sigh* I don't think I'm ever going to be able to make a complete 'this is an evil mindless monster; kill it' scenario. At least, have that and keep it like that. XD;; But I prefer it that way anyway. :3 ( ... )

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