Another Master and Slave thing snippet

Oct 13, 2011 07:12

Haha, influenced by lucathia-rykatu's style here, and I wanted to try to write a fairy tale-ish type narrative for this anyway. :3


*on the first sentence* ommmmmmg, why are you doing this to meeeeeee?? They don't look that different from humans?! So I could technically have three threads going on at once? *cry*

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original: master and slave thing, writing: nanowrimo, writing, fandom: original fiction

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darkicedragon October 14 2011, 14:37:07 UTC
"What's to say they're completely unlike humans? (And are there possibly any half geists...?)"
Haha...ha ha...ha..... Don't know about the half-geists (yet) but there's definite intelligence in some of them. *spoilers* Enough to have arguments with and hold proper conversations. *sigh* I don't think I'm ever going to be able to make a complete 'this is an evil mindless monster; kill it' scenario. At least, have that and keep it like that. XD;; But I prefer it that way anyway. :3

"That might stir up a lot of arguments and conflicts, since people probably have different views?"
More stuff to think about! XD;;;

"What, what? Now you make me think geists are organized and intelligent."
*snerk* They are. But I guess that makes them a good challenge - it would be too easy if they weren't.

"So he'll be almost a blank slate then? But not completely oblivious? He didn't seem too oblivious in your drabbles to the prompts I threw at you."
I'm not entirely sure. He picks things up fast? Understands what things do quickly? (Least he doesn't have to work out what the heck a TV is. XDD)

I'm very tempted to have the gods give him innate knowledge of the world so psyvens don't end up killing themselves by trying to find out...what a well does. If they should stay away from the large predator. What fire is.

I'm fairly sure psyvens are born knowing that they're there to give their khertan magic.

"Haha, you wrote a summary already! It's a very cool summary. XD"
Heeee! Now watch it change all over again!

"Battery, hm, battery... XD;;; That reminds me of this manga! XD;;"
Ooh! Shiny! :D *takes note of it*

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lucathia_rykatu October 16 2011, 06:17:59 UTC
I don't think I'm ever going to be able to make a complete 'this is an evil mindless monster; kill it' scenario.
If things were that black and white, that'd be a lot less interesting. =P Hm, and enemies with intelligence seem like they could be a lot deadlier.

I'm not entirely sure. He picks things up fast? Understands what things do quickly? (Least he doesn't have to work out what the heck a TV is. XDD)
Wait, is it because there's no TV in their universe? XDDD

I'm fairly sure psyvens are born knowing that they're there to give their khertan magic.
Of course, now you make me want to see a psyven who rejects that role. =P

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darkicedragon October 16 2011, 17:43:32 UTC
"If things were that black and white, that'd be a lot less interesting. =P"
This is a very good point. XDD It would make decisions way too easy! There would be no thoughts/thinking about stuff.

"Wait, is it because there's no TV in their universe? XDDD"
Yes. That is exactly the reason why. XDDDD

"Of course, now you make me want to see a psyven who rejects that role. =P"
... The Gods would smite them for daring to go against Their will! Pffffthahaha. Dammit~ I somehow completely forgot I had that as a plot point! Oh, right, the other plot point came up. *takes a note* It can be tied to the first plot point, because that was where it was supposed to be anyway! XD;; huuuuuuge. huuuuuuuuuuge! Though, if they didn't give their khertan magic when they needed it, chances are they're in a fight against a geist so...they'll die if they don't give magic. :S

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