Comments | colourmayfade: fic: such heavenly ways

colourmayfade

fic: such heavenly ways

Jul 29, 2009 18:04

lost. summary: our sins are only deadly because we allow them to be. sawyer; hurley, miles, dr. chang, etc. sawyer/juliet. 5,575 words. rated: pg-16.

disclaimer: not mine!
a/n: written for emiliglia as part of the luau at lostsquee. prompt: s6 speculation.

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ship: sawyer/juliet, fic: lost, tv: lost, character: sawyer, !fic

Comments 18

cantbesilent July 29 2009, 22:52:11 UTC

This got to me in a way I can't quite explain, it moved me in almost an aching way; the prose is hauntingly beautiful, you have tremendous skill.

colourmayfade July 31 2009, 10:00:29 UTC

Wow. Those are incredibly nice things to say, thank you.

elliotsmelliot July 30 2009, 03:41:58 UTC

What an intriguing, unique, and well written story. Although the heart of the story was Sawyer, I was most moved by the Miles and Hurley sections. You did a remarkable job with everyone's voices too. Great work!

colourmayfade July 31 2009, 10:02:58 UTC

Aw, thanks! The Miles and Hurley sections certainly were more effortless, you're pretty perceptive for picking that up!

great fic anonymous July 30 2009, 12:40:46 UTC

awesome fic. congrats. I especially liked all the scenes with sawyer and miles:)

Re: great fic colourmayfade July 31 2009, 10:03:42 UTC

Thanks!

bold_seer July 31 2009, 06:58:28 UTC

Wow.

Miles, Hurley - I really felt for them, but it was, of course, Sawyer who affected me the most. The scenes with Sawyer1 and Sawyer2 - very impressive!

colourmayfade July 31 2009, 10:26:16 UTC

Oh, thank you! I'm so glad you particularly enjoyed the Sawyer parts, because he is hands down the hardest to write!

sadie_carter August 1 2009, 20:41:40 UTC

Wow, that is a really amazing story. I loved it very much. Of course it's a scenario I would never want to see in a show (God, "Lost" without Juliet - that would be unbearable!), but as a idea for a fanfiction, I'm delighted by it ( ... )

colourmayfade August 2 2009, 18:05:37 UTC

! Oh, my. I don't even know where to start thanking you for this review! It makes me blush and feel all warm inside.

I completely agree that this is something I wouldn't want to see the show. But as far as plot bunnies go, I thought it would be interesting to play with. (And yes, idk how Lost even considered going on without Elizabeth. I can't even imagine the show without her now!)

Even this sort of distant Sawyer, I don't know how attractive that would be on the show, because we're so used to seeing him all active and energetic. But like you said, that scene on the finale... I didn't even know Josh had that in him! LOL. It just seems to me like something in Sawyer would have to come apart after that. And to have him crying in the corner all of sudden would be a stretch, I think. Honestly, the only two ways I can see him going now is either really really mean or this ( ... )

sadie_carter August 5 2009, 11:17:10 UTC

Hee, I'm glad you were able to stand Kate, because I certainly wasn't! Even as I was writing I just wanted to slap her senseless.
LOL :D Finally someone, who can't stand Kate and isn't afraid to say it at loud :D That's what I love :D I really, really hate this character. Srsly, never, ever had I hate some character like that. And I was so happy, that in the end it was Juliet, who won James heart, because seeing him with Kate was so painful! Of course, like you said, we can't ignore their relationship, but I believe, that Juliet is *the one* for James and writers won't dare to create in a season 6 any situation, that may suggest, that Sawyer can turn back his feelings to Kate. It would be like the worst scenario ever and I can't even imagine anything like that...

From the end of S4, I knew something was going to happen with those two, but I thought it would be a beautiful angsty relationship, filled with bitterness and hurt. And when LaFleur happened, I was sort of shocked to see them so... loving.Yes, it definitely was amazing to ( ... )