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Fic - "A Private Little War"

Jul 20, 2010 19:41

Title: A Private Little War
Author: colonel_bastard
Characters/Fandom: Basil, Ratigan, Dawson. The Great Mouse Detective.
Word Count: 4,000
Rating: PG-13
Summary: Between the capture and the kill, Ratigan savors the moment. Dawson observes and intervenes.
Warnings: Molestation, an F-bomb, general desecration of beloved Disney characters.
Notes: ( Read more... )

fanfiction, disney_kink, character: ratigan, the great mouse detective, character: basil

Comments 31

unsettledink July 21 2010, 00:40:21 UTC

...I can't even....

I promise I'll come back tomorrow and give you a proper comment. Right after I finish sobbing my heart out.

colonel_bastard July 21 2010, 04:46:53 UTC

I'm so pleased! I mean, not specifically pleased that I made you cry (awwww!), but pleased that you were so moved. <3

Ok, back with excessivly long incoherent babbling. *facepalm* unsettledink July 23 2010, 07:19:59 UTC

I know I said I'd be back a couple days ago; in apology, have INSANLY long babbling.

Ok, so my very first reaction was YAY YAY YAY OMG MORE FIC YAY. I believe anneka can attest to that, since my next action was to im her the yay and link. And then I started reading, quite literally quivering in excitement. (I mean, I somehow managed to comment before the post timestamp. THAT'S HOW EXCITED I WAS.

Yay Dawson! Huh, yeah, at this stage they wouldn't have known each other long. Which only makes this more disturbing. And I love how you make him quietly badass. It's lovely - he's not the fumbler so often shown, but he's not as, er, excessive as law's ( ... )

colonel_bastard July 24 2010, 02:01:37 UTC

I have to say that I am so flattered and honored that you would leave such a long, thoughtful review of this piece. Really. I appreciate every last word of it, and the time that you must have put into writing it. I'm so lucky to have readers like you. <3

Dawson was the reason this fic took so long! I'd gotten so used to writing just Basil and Ratigan, I was really thrown for a loop when someone prompted a third party, and especially one of such significance. I really wanted to do his character justice (considering the importance he'll eventually have in Basil's life), and I'm just so pleased to hear that it worked.

FEEL FREE TO SEND PLOT BUNNIES. SERIOUSLY. This entire series has been built on prompts!! It's the plot bunnies from you guys that make it happen, and I would love to hear what you have to say. ^_ ( ... )

Thread 6

anneka_neko July 21 2010, 02:11:20 UTC

BAWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW. I feel like I should be sad, like unsettledfic, but I'm just like GLEE AT TRUE LOVE and OH DAWSON YOU JUST DON'T GET THE MAN-LOVE DO YOU and AWWWW POOR RATIGAN HE NEVER GOT THAT LAST BLOWJOB!

YOU. WITH THE AWESOME. ILU. YOU RULE. SO MUCH.

anneka_neko July 21 2010, 04:03:02 UTC

Also I forgot to say before, but IS THAT A STAR TREK REFERENCE? *embrace*

If not, oh well, it is now. *STILL EMBRACE*

colonel_bastard July 21 2010, 05:00:11 UTC

I KNOWWWW. POOR RATIGAN. I feel really bad for denying him that last thrill. XD

OMG IT IS A STAR TREK REFERENCE. *answering embrace* Nice catch! :D

ILU2. Never forget that you're the one who started all this. Thanks so much for your continuing support and comments, I really appreciate it! <3

PS. omg the next fill is your smoking prompt and I'm really really excited.

anneka_neko July 21 2010, 05:04:13 UTC

Ffffffffffffff stoppit you'll make my head explode! xD

AND YAY OMG OMG YAY. YAAAAY.

And idk if you saw, I popped my GMD-writing cherry! :D And have some other ideas to write, now I've gotten that first ficlet out of the way.

anneka_neko July 21 2010, 05:49:03 UTC

OFFICIALLY DEBUTING MY AWESOME ICON OF AWESOMENESS HERE.

THAT'S PRETTY MUCH ALL.

colonel_bastard July 21 2010, 06:02:48 UTC

I ANSWER WITH MY MOST BAD-ASS ICON AND IT IS STILL NOT AS BAD-ASS AS YOUR ICON.

I APPROVE.

eve_n_furter July 21 2010, 11:00:44 UTC

*sniff. sniffsniffsniff - - - BAAAAAAWWWL!!!*
I need to lay down in a dark corner and lick my scars for a while. I'll get back to you with a more coherent comment when I'm more coherent. Yes.
Oh, yes. Also THANKS!!! (Hurt me more, please! ;)

colonel_bastard July 21 2010, 18:05:39 UTC

Awwwwww! I never thought that this would be the one that reduces everyone to incoherency, but now that it has, I couldn't be happier. ^_^

You're very welcome, and thanks so much for prompting. <3

[Your wish is my command! ;) ]

eve_n_furter August 14 2010, 20:14:04 UTC

I'm back! Sorry it took so long, but RL came and took me - I've been on vacation so I can't truthfully say I'm sorry for that - but I am sorry that I didn't manage to give you a better review before I left. The upside is that it gives me another opportunity to dive deep into your GMD universe. \o ( ... )

colonel_bastard August 16 2010, 21:37:53 UTC

Haha, I've been on vacation, too--- hence the delay in the next installment! I hope you enjoyed your holiday as much as I enjoyed mine. <3 ( ... )

became_fire July 21 2010, 18:13:13 UTC

Ooooooh! That was...ooooooooh! I can't make words yet, that was amazing! So powerful, I couldn't take my eyes off the screen, that was completely gripping and emotional and wow *flails in the absence of suitable words*

colonel_bastard July 21 2010, 18:37:06 UTC

Oohoo, I've induced flailing! I hope it's not a permanent absence of words, but I am quite pleased that I caused it. ^_^

I figured any kind of epilogue for this series would have to be pretty devastating, and I'm just so thrilled that everyone's reacting accordingly. "Gripping and emotional" is what I love to hear!

Thanks so much for reading and commenting, as always. Faithful readers are the BEST. <3