Each Night - Chapter 02

[childishgrin]

Title: Each Night
Author: Viv
Genre: drama, angst, smutt, fluff
Rating: NC-17
Fandom: Simple Plan [music - band]
Pairing: David/Sebastien
Disclaimer: Shit! I forgot to feed them! *runs off*
Summary: This was how it was to be whenever the door was closed and locked and the sun went down. [multi-chaptered: (01). Complete.]
Dedications: _daretoglance (simply

Comments

[neitoperhonen]

I really, really really love the ending.

“I love you, blue-eyed angel.”
“Your blue-eyed angel. I love you too.”
So beautiful. I'm sorry I can't say anything better or deeper of this now but I'm kinda stunned of this. Too good, too hot and too beautiful but then again nothing to too hot or good or beautiful.

[childishgrin]

*blinks* Already?

Aww, thank you. :)

[neitoperhonen]

Already what? I'm fast :D

It's too late for me to think anything great in English, is Finnish alright? I can do that...

[childishgrin]

I just am never able to expect it when I get a comment within the first 10 minutes I post something. It just makes me go "uh?" XD

[apple]

Oh my gosh. I just absolutely, absolutely loved this.

It was so sad, but really so sweet. I was wincing at how you described the pain. You did an amazing job describing that. I loved how you took it all step by step and didn't have them really rush into it all. I felt so incredibly bad for both of them when Seb was in pain. It made the story feel real. And painful. Ohsopainful. And sad.

I adored how Sebastien wanted David to make him his. And when he did, "You have me. My heart. I'm yours now." Just beautiful. And how at the end, they knew just what each other meant

[childishgrin]

Dear, the kind of comments you leave are lovely in themselves. (I don't even know if that last part of my sentence made any sense there, my frenchness is coming through.)

My old disclaimer was getting. well. old, so I changed it to something that my sense of sarcasm often makes me "say" and that came out.

[lovestephenking]

:*:*:* I love it.

Dahling, I work tonight I'll be home maybe after 9PM. <3333 This was so lovely and ugh cute cute I love every bit of it. And yes, I am growing up right before your eyes ;*

[childishgrin]

I'll try to still be on by then. ;*

[mickey_mouse133]

this was so good there was sooooooo much detail i lvoe it and the disclaimer was hilarious

[childishgrin]

:)

[role_model99]

oh. my. god. that was the CUTEST thing I have read in like...for ever! wonderful job!
~Aimee

[childishgrin]

Thanks.