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Raspberry Swirl - KH AU Series - Story1Ch.4

Jan 21, 2007 12:03

Title: Raspberry Swirl
Author: Me! _superherogirl_ :D
Pairing: RikuSora, AkuRoku, Kaiphie? xD Subtle hints of Cloud/Leon
Rating: PG-16 always to be on the safe side
Summary: Three cheers for the hilarity that is adolescence! The heart is a very complex thing, and these teenagers on the verge of going to adulthood are going to realize how important it really is ( Read more... )

kairi rules, kairi, riku/sora, fic, raspberry swirl au, selphie, kingdom hearts

Comments 23

trekiael January 21 2007, 20:34:17 UTC

Ha! I knew I forgot a review when i did all my late reviews yesterday night. So, yeah, sorry for not reviewing your previous chapter, I'm in my exams period ( ... )

trekiael January 22 2007, 15:10:39 UTC

Oh yeah, and forgot, love Sora trying to play the Emo kid but failing miserably. XDDD

_superherogirl_ January 22 2007, 17:12:21 UTC

Oh yay I do love your reviews so so so much! Oh holy eff' your icon! LOL I LOVE IT and agree wholeheartedly. ;P And gosh no don't worry if you don't get to review, I completely understand. Goodluck with your exams by the way! Now, ahem that I got that out of the way, time for my long ass reply ( ... )

trekiael January 22 2007, 20:02:20 UTC

I can't help it, I have to reply. Leaving long ass reviews is one of my guilty pleasures, sadly it takes me time and I can't always favor everyone with them. I love it even more, and it's a reason for mychoice in which author I'll do the effort to review for, as I NEVER give a short 'Good job! Update soon!' review, is when I know they'll take the time to reply. But you, you write replies longer than my own reviews! Unbielievable! You're really kind ( ... )

Thread 10

renaissanced January 22 2007, 02:58:14 UTC

“Right… So what you’re trying to say is that everyone has a little fag inside them just waiting to pop out and want to do other people of the same sex?”

This chapter was just full of things that made me want to burst out laughing -- not a good thing when you are 'doing your homework'. xD

Butbutbut, anyway. I loved it, as I love random AU fics that are crack, know they are crack, yet always rub me the right way. These chapters are fun to read~ ♥

_superherogirl_ January 22 2007, 17:17:48 UTC

Yay! Thank you for the review sweetie! :D I'm very happy that you found the fic humorous, I aim to make people laugh with my stupidities. I'm just glad that it works from time to time. *beams stupidly*

Oh dear naughty, naughty reading cracktastic stuff, while you're supposed to be 'doing your homework' ;). Although hell I'm not complaining and neither is my fic. :D *cough* I mean yes, distractions bad, homework necessary... yes. >.>;

AU fics are my guilty pleasure, you can do whatever the hell you want with them. Such flexibility! And gosh thank you again I'm sooooo glad you think so. I swear, my dreams of putting together my own sitcom will come someday! if I am not told they're at least amusing or fun to read... I think my fag haggy heart would deteriorate and I wouldn't be able to write anymore. D: Which makes me sad all on it's own because I need something to kill time!♥♥♥

renaissanced January 26 2007, 02:32:44 UTC

HI FLORIDA PERSON. :D What part? I'm in Marion County, one hour south of Gainesville.

Nonono! Write! Your stories have a different flavor of awesome, don't stop~ OMGSITCOM. maybe I'd actually watch it >__> And I didn't mean to insult crack when I said "yet always rub me the right way"; I meant to say something like: "Some crack stories are so spontaneous and random that I think they are just kind of stupid, and that it takes a good writer to write good crack, and you are a good writer because while everyone's still in character, it's really funny and I love it because the little OOC alarm isn't dying in agony so yes it is good" but my sneaky mind decided that was too long. :3

....My homework is done tonight. (: Ahaha, makes it all the better.

_superherogirl_ January 29 2007, 23:46:13 UTC

HEY! XD I'm from Dade County, blegh. A little town/city called Hialeah. It really sucks down here. ;-; But gotta make the most of it!

AWW THANK YOU!! *blush* Never! I have so much fun writing these kinds of stories, it's going to be really hard to stop. The only way I would stop is if- well I dunno how I would but it would have to be something big to do so!

SQUEE You would make me one real happy bunny bun bun if you would watch my sitcom :o Oh no don't worry I know exactly what you mean though! At least for me I prefer writing cracktastic comedy so it all works out. ;p Oh gosh you're making me turn as red as a tomato! But I totally agree it is a challenge to write crack and making the kids stay in character, but it's definitely a challenge I enjoy taking. xP Once again thank yoouuu!♥♥♥

Thread 5

hatesastrongwrd January 25 2007, 00:40:34 UTC

♥ I love this story! It's really funny and wow are their a lot of pairings. Lol. Kairi is so awesome the way you wrote her! I'm used to reading stories where she tries to break Sora and Riku up, but this is better ^_^

I'm guessing Jack and Jackie are Namine and Cloud in the future or something? Am I right?

I hope the next chapter isn't the last :/ even if it is long, because this is a really fun story to read :) Well even if it is the last I can always read your other stuff :)
-ALANAWHOLOVESTHISSTORY-
Lol!
Yah... I'm awesome like that :P

_superherogirl_ January 30 2007, 14:25:45 UTC

First of all, thank you so much hon! ;P I'm very glad you like it so far, and oh gosh yes many pairings indeed. :x But I can't help it, there are just so many people you could possibly pair up! XD ( ... )

hatesastrongwrd February 5 2007, 23:29:52 UTC

Lol! Yes, she should definetely help it along the way :D

Oh okay, I was like "Hmmm. Forshadowing?" Lol, I don't really remember what Jack Frost looks like. Lol, my memory sucks.

Lol! More stories are always welcome. Saga? Sweet! Lol, you aren't too terribly weird, when I get in my moods, I can be weeeird. *claps* Yay you used the term '*crickets*'! I always say "crickets" out loud and no one ever understands lol! *hugs back* And I'll definetely like the next chapte! :D

obtains January 25 2007, 02:54:00 UTC

ooooh, another nice chappie! And the Frost siblings were a creally cute idea too X3 I just started reading this series, and I must say, I like it alot.

_superherogirl_ January 30 2007, 14:40:51 UTC

Thank you so much sweets! *squees loudly* YAY! I was so worried the Frost siblings would be shunned by the KH fandom! They're only there to serve their purpose and then they'll be gone, but it was sure as hell fun to write them. :D

And double YAY :D Do you know how happy I am right now? Very glad you're liking this series, and there's much more to come so you're definitely in for a long ride. No matter if I finish up this one, I guarantee there will be stories to follow it up. ;** Once again thank you!

hillando January 28 2007, 17:30:43 UTC

_superherogirl_ January 30 2007, 14:47:10 UTC

LOL I KNOW RIGHT And that's the sad thing! But I can't really blame Sora, swing music is awesome. xD

That's an oxymoron if I ever heard/wrote >.>; one, but I agree on it being true as well. It's undeniable that someone in their life hasn't found someone of the same sex attractive. It's life, people just have to deal with it and stop making such a fuss.

Holy hell thank you! I'm very glad you like it so far as well as honored. I was worried about adding all the cheesy humor, but well comedy is something I can never avoid in my writing. And when it comes to crack, it's rather addicting. :x Oh sweet irony. :| Thank you again sweetie! *huggss* :P ♥♥♥

hillando February 1 2007, 17:52:56 UTC