Raspberry Swirl - KH AU Series - Story1Ch.4

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Title: Raspberry Swirl
Author: Me! _superherogirl_ :D
Pairing: RikuSora, AkuRoku, Kaiphie? xD Subtle hints of Cloud/Leon
Rating: PG-16 always to be on the safe side
Summary: Three cheers for the hilarity that is adolescence! The heart is a very complex thing, and these teenagers on the verge of going to adulthood are going to realize how important it really is

Comments

[renaissanced]

“Right… So what you’re trying to say is that everyone has a little fag inside them just waiting to pop out and want to do other people of the same sex?”

This chapter was just full of things that made me want to burst out laughing -- not a good thing when you are 'doing your homework'. xD

Butbutbut, anyway. I loved it, as I love random AU fics that are crack, know they are crack, yet always rub me the right way. These chapters are fun to read~ ♥

[_superherogirl_]

Yay! Thank you for the review sweetie! :D I'm very happy that you found the fic humorous, I aim to make people laugh with my stupidities. I'm just glad that it works from time to time. *beams stupidly*

Oh dear naughty, naughty reading cracktastic stuff, while you're supposed to be 'doing your homework' ;). Although hell I'm not complaining and neither is my fic. :D *cough* I mean yes, distractions bad, homework necessary... yes. >.>;

AU fics are my guilty pleasure, you can do whatever the hell you want with them. Such flexibility! And gosh thank you again I'm sooooo glad you think so. I swear, my dreams of putting together my own sitcom will come someday! if I am not told they're at least amusing or fun to read... I think my fag haggy heart would deteriorate and I wouldn't be able to write anymore. D: Which makes me sad all on it's own because I need something to kill time!♥♥♥

[renaissanced]

HI FLORIDA PERSON. :D What part? I'm in Marion County, one hour south of Gainesville.

Nonono! Write! Your stories have a different flavor of awesome, don't stop~ OMGSITCOM. maybe I'd actually watch it >__> And I didn't mean to insult crack when I said "yet always rub me the right way"; I meant to say something like: "Some crack stories are so spontaneous and random that I think they are just kind of stupid, and that it takes a good writer to write good crack, and you are a good writer because while everyone's still in character, it's really funny and I love it because the little OOC alarm isn't dying in agony so yes it is good" but my sneaky mind decided that was too long. :3

....My homework is done tonight. (: Ahaha, makes it all the better.

[_superherogirl_]

HEY! XD I'm from Dade County, blegh. A little town/city called Hialeah. It really sucks down here. ;-; But gotta make the most of it!

AWW THANK YOU!! *blush* Never! I have so much fun writing these kinds of stories, it's going to be really hard to stop. The only way I would stop is if- well I dunno how I would but it would have to be something big to do so!

SQUEE You would make me one real happy bunny bun bun if you would watch my sitcom :o Oh no don't worry I know exactly what you mean though! At least for me I prefer writing cracktastic comedy so it all works out. ;p Oh gosh you're making me turn as red as a tomato! But I totally agree it is a challenge to write crack and making the kids stay in character, but it's definitely a challenge I enjoy taking. xP Once again thank yoouuu!♥♥♥

[_superherogirl_]

And cool you're from Florida too! :D Sorry I just had a look at your user info, heh heh. >.>;