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Raspberry Swirl - KH AU Series - Story1Ch.4

Jan 21, 2007 12:03

Title: Raspberry Swirl
Author: Me! _superherogirl_ :D
Pairing: RikuSora, AkuRoku, Kaiphie? xD Subtle hints of Cloud/Leon
Rating: PG-16 always to be on the safe side
Summary: Three cheers for the hilarity that is adolescence! The heart is a very complex thing, and these teenagers on the verge of going to adulthood are going to realize how important it really is ( Read more... )

kairi rules, kairi, riku/sora, fic, raspberry swirl au, selphie, kingdom hearts

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_superherogirl_ January 22 2007, 17:12:21 UTC

Oh yay I do love your reviews so so so much! Oh holy eff' your icon! LOL I LOVE IT and agree wholeheartedly. ;P And gosh no don't worry if you don't get to review, I completely understand. Goodluck with your exams by the way! Now, ahem that I got that out of the way, time for my long ass reply.

You are seriously making me blush, I'm just so glad that it didn't out as crummy as I thought. At least it was believable and that's what I try to go for, except for all the ridiculous things that happen along the way, but I'm sure you understand why I must make those things happen. >.>;; *gets glared at by fictional characters* It's kinda sad how I go all cuckoo bananas for all the in between stuff more- exactly I'm a sucker too!- the teasing is the best part! And when they're trying to resist, even better. >:)

Of course! One thing I have to say that I'm very happy about, at least the Kingdom Hearts and Final Fantasy fandom is PACKED with all these loveable characters. It's not necessary to add any original ones, that's what I lack in band slash- I love it don't get me wrong but sometimes I get lazy and don't feel like making up original characters- although sometimes in fandoms like Kingdom Hearts you get eaten alive with you bring an oc into the picture. :|

Yay! At least you found the boy's letter humorous! Since honestly when I began to write this fic, there was really no plot... I added one quickly ( not a very good one, but I do promise the next stories will be strictly about the character's relationship problems and such ) and that's how the whole snow thing came out. I mean, Sora is capable of writing something like that in my opinion, another reason why I do love the boy very much.

Heck yes! And my future fics will have even more, and duh the last chapter too. :D Yay for big ol' hints, I did try my bestest. :3

Ditto! That situation was overly embarrassing and there was no way that he could stay there. *Sora stands there awkwardly while everyone stares.* "I got stuck dammit!!! >:O!" *everyone's jaw drops and Riku le dies temporarily*

Oh yes, yes! Lots of angst, and unfortunately I have a feeling there will be a lot of unfinished business in this fic... but since it's not the last in the series I don't feel as bad. Can you tell I've always wanted to put together my own sitcom? >.>;

Thank you so much! I totally had too much fun typing the Roxas and Sora moment out. They're so much fun to write, then again I say that about all of them. ^-^; LOL I HAD to, maybe falling off the ladder would get him to realize his true feelings for Axel... Nah it won't yet but it could help along the way. *wriggles eyebrows* And definitely more angst! Or at least I'll try.

Yes! Oh gosh you don't know how much I've been dying to officially get them into the story. I had started this standalone awhile back for the pairing, maybe one day I'll finish it. I hope, then I can share yet another craptastic fic? >.>; *semi-beams* And I totally agree, I love Cloud but I cannot make him out to be a pansy, he just doesn't look the part. Once again thank you so much, you're terribly too sweet to me. I'm glad it stayed in character though. :D

*SNORT* SCORE! That was totally my guilty pleasure this chapter I think. When I was typing out the scene where Sora was trying to be all angsty teenager, I couldn't help but laugh when one of my swing songs started playing on my comp. *snickers*

And gosh I feel bad wanting to take a break- which I totally don't- but knowing me I would come crawling back and write more crackAUshite. Makes me happy that someone would miss me! For what is probably the tenth time, thank you so much for taking the time to leave me such an awesome review! :D:D:D:D:D Shoot, I'm one happy bunny right now as well, staring at a very smexy icon that only states the truth. ;)

trekiael January 22 2007, 20:02:20 UTC

I can't help it, I have to reply. Leaving long ass reviews is one of my guilty pleasures, sadly it takes me time and I can't always favor everyone with them. I love it even more, and it's a reason for mychoice in which author I'll do the effort to review for, as I NEVER give a short 'Good job! Update soon!' review, is when I know they'll take the time to reply. But you, you write replies longer than my own reviews! Unbielievable! You're really kind.

Thanks for my icon, all the credit go to fantasia0829 (sorry, i've got no idea how to link to someone's LJ). She's an awsome author, if you don't know her, go read her fics! She did this icon just for me, so it's mine, and I fobid anyone to take it, nah! :P

Oh, when I talked about angst warning, I didn't mean I was asking for some. I much prefer humor/romance/adventure than angst. Though I agree there have to be some angst in it. I just hate classical angst like rape, cutting, death, beating and all that shit. I prefer deeper angst, when it has to do with mental conflicts, emotions and all of that shit, if you know what I mean.

I personally possess the deep hatred for all OC, especially in huge fandoms where they certainly aren't necesseray. For KH, it's bordering on insulting, considering the many charac the fandom possess, plus all the ff ones that can easily be included. with a friend, we wanted to write a KH/naruto crossover fic, but when we tried to think of all the pairings (almost all of them yaoi or yuri) and all the charac we thought would stay single, we realized that fuck, there was so many of them! And we didn't even put them all!!

When you talk about fics and futur fics, you mean chapters, right? Cause if not, it hardly makes sense...XD

Thanks for your awsome reply, but really, no need to thank me so much, I'm just doing my duty as a loyal reader to this fic to review correctly. we have to give some feedback when deserved, yeah? Especially to awsome fics that don't have that many reviews. I know that some people read fics by the number of reviews, when I'm lazy, I'll admit it helps me to choose. But when I discover an awsome story that I think deserves lots of reviews, I do my best to review until it becomes famous, hehehehe. XD

Anyway, night bunny!

_superherogirl_ January 22 2007, 23:31:11 UTC

Ditto, ditto! Aww shucks I feel mighty honored right about now. :3 Thank you, but no you're the kind one. :P

Ooooh I must check her out immediately in that case! I'm always looking for awesome authors with to die for stories. :3 It was really sweet of her to make it for you, but indeed it's brilliant! *bows down to thy icon*

Oops... >.>; *nervous laugh* Well I do promise it won't be an exaggeration or anything. I never did good with angst anyway. I did this small drabble the other day that was supposed to be SoRiku angst... oh dear never again. I cried after I finished writing it. D: I'm too much of a sap for those kinda things. Although, I agree there's lots of angsty fics out there, but for me I don't really like them much or write them for fun. My list of faves always tend to be comedies. Even if I'm been guilty of craving for one of those dark fics from time to time.

You are absolutely right though. It's not necessary to bring in any OCs, it just isn't. Oh wow I can imagine with all the characters from both KH and Naruto!

Oh oops sorry if I confused ya. :x Well what I mean is that there will be other stories but next chapter will definitely be the last for this one fic. Since I'm determined to continue this so called KH AU series of mine, but in other words this will definitely not be the last of me. :D Dun, dun, dunnnnn. I mean... I even thought about what the characters jobs/colleges, astrological signs, and where they will be living. >.>; At least most of the ff characters have birthdays, but the kh ones well I gotta get a little creative- Oh god I've just probably made an ass of myself. I really do have no life. *cries*

But yes thank you! I can never get enough of your reviews, they're just awesome to read. I know what you mean, sometimes I wonder if I should continue with that wacky idea of mine... but then people like you leave me a nice long review and gets me back on track ;D. Famous?! You're too awesome seriously! XDD *huggles*

Nighty night, until next time!

trekiael January 23 2007, 06:43:35 UTC

_superherogirl_ January 23 2007, 08:46:48 UTC

*JAW DROPS LIKE WHOA*

WOWZA THANK YOU!! *throws confetti everywhere* YAY! I'm gonna have mondo fun for long long time yes!!! *kisses your feet* Oh I hope not, it'll probably just make me want to write more actually. I'm weird like that, but yay!

Oh gosh you're right, now I'm doubting myself here. But I'll try my best, maybe it will be the last maybe not... I know how I am. I guess this was just my way of actually trying to finish a fic. I never in my fanfic writing history finished a chaptered story, so I was really worried I would do the same again. But you're right, if I can't wrap it up properly then I absolutely can't make it the last chapter. :x

LOL Lemme think hmmm... Well since I cheated and checked your userinfo and it says France. So I'm gonna take a guess and say somewhere in France? >.>; *mighty subtle*

trekiael January 23 2007, 10:24:31 UTC

You're welcome. ^^ Have fun!

You checked my user info? Well, as I use my LJ only to comment in communities, it's awfully boring. Sadly, I don't know shit about how to use LJ, doing cuts and fake cuts and hell, even what the hell is the difference between them! XD I wish I knew, though, then maybe I could post myself. Anyway, you cheated, so no dollaaars (imagin Cartman's accent here) for you! XP

If you keep posting your fic here, I'll keep reviewing, and you'll never get stuck on ideas. XD

Ja!

_superherogirl_ January 30 2007, 14:52:34 UTC

I'm so sorry it took me THIS long to reply! I'm so miffed because my damn internets are acting up, yet again. My internet service provider is a real ass. ;-; *kicks them* Comcastic, I;ll give them so much comcastic it'll hurt. >:|

And yes I cheated LOL, which I'm terribly sorry for. *lowers head in shame* ;-; >.>; *coughs*

Oooh and if you ever need help with the fake cuts and such I'm your man! I mean err... woman! :D I'll get a text box thingie and post the html now, as long as my internet doesn't cut me off mid comment. I would love to read your stuff!♥

SQUEE! *got a little excited* Seriously you are TOO SWEET for your own good, AH THE CAVITIES!! *tackles you XD*

trekiael January 30 2007, 15:38:06 UTC

XD Don't worry, I didn't actually expect you to review, hence why I made it this short.

Haha, yeah, you cheated. but you were honest to tell me, so it doesn't matter! XD

Really? you'll help me? Thanks! i might need it sometimes one of these days, if I get my ass into it. XD

I like to be tackled! But really, you're the first person to ever caling me sweet.

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