An Odd Taste of Nostalgia

Mar 01, 2013 16:03

Title: An Odd Taste of Nostalgia
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Smut, romance, au
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: This isn't usually what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?

“Aish, I think you gave me carpet burn,” complains Key in sudden realization, rubbing at his back. )

jongkey, oneshot

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cuethemusicc March 1 2013, 22:14:49 UTC
OH MY GOD YOU POSTED IT
YOU POSTED THE SMUT
SPOT
YES
GOOD

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bestplace March 1 2013, 22:18:46 UTC
OH GOD NOW I WISH I HADN'T I'M SO EMBARRASSED NFDJDFHDKSF

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cuethemusicc March 1 2013, 23:23:08 UTC
bow chicka wow wow~
omfg you need to write smut always. or at least write jongkey always i've been craving your writing so bad ;A; i needed this. i tried to do the whole quote thing but then got distracted because smut >.>
lol at key eating all the candy i can totally imagine that xD he loves food too much hahaha. their interactions in your fics are my favorite thing.

“No, don’t stop,” Key demands, and Jonghyun tamely continues his lazy movements. “I just-this isn’t usually what…what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?” he struggles to ask in a croaky voice. i love how you subtly capture the feeling of nostalgia. like how so many things have changed since they were young and best friends... yet everything is the same? do i make sense?

“You’re so gorgeous, so, so gorgeous…” god i love pleasure drunk blabber it's my favorite

“Kiss me,” Key breathes hysterically, like those are his final words, urgency lacing his guttural tone. yes yes yes yessssss the desperation comes across well, i'm actually crying.

“You must be kidding. I…I ( ... )

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cuethemusicc March 1 2013, 23:39:14 UTC
OH YEAH AND THE HINTED KEYHYUN
i totally imagine them switching a lot though jonghyun tops more because of his masculinity complex though and key because he's a needy bish

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yui8_lin March 1 2013, 23:21:29 UTC
I swear at the begging I thought they were children and I was like O.O... I'm so dumb sometimes, then I understood and everything went perfect.

So SMUT YOU GIRL! adsdfdfgdgdfs
THIS! I like it so much, how Jonghyun wants to be romantic and no dirty talking and every damn sentence the two said were utterly perfect I swear ;___;

I just like this type of relationship so much, when they can play and be sexy and be intimate at the same time. The part when Kibum told Jong that he was beautiful made all of this just a little more special I swear.

“You must be kidding. I…I was being totally sexy and now you’re gonna stop? What’s an intimate night without dry sex?"

THAT was hilarious. And the you're a pervert when Key told that he wanted him inside was funny also.

THE HINT at KeyHyun at the end! Five starts for you! And cookies a lot of cookies.

This made me happy and now I shall go to clean my room -Oh men :/-
Thank you for this! Hope you post more frequently :9
Bye!

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:32:25 UTC
omfg i knew that would happen to someone XD excuse my misleading summary

omg i'm glad you think so! ;w;

exactly, types of relationships like that are so wonderful and special, and most definitely the most fun to write about!

hahaha glad you liked the humor. c:

/eats cookies \o/ keyhyun ftw okay

that reminds me... i need to clean my room, too... >>
thank you so very much! this comment made me so happy! ^^ ♥

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:33:53 UTC
FNKDFJKDJF YOUR ALL CAPS IS MAKING ME ALL EXCITED

smut is so harrrdddd but i'm gonna try to write more. JUST FOR YOU BABY, OKAY?? JUST FOR YOU.

omfg no you're the flawless one. thank you so much, love you too ;w;

lmao I'm so glad you liked him XD thanks for reading! ♥

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just2wings March 2 2013, 00:09:27 UTC
SPOTTTTT

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just2wings March 2 2013, 07:22:55 UTC
“Jonghyun, will you get the corner of this blanket for me?” Key summons. first line only and my feels are activated ;_;
The younger’s lids fall shut automatically and his body stills. my feels. sorry I'm not very coherent a;lsdjflasjdf ze cute
Key responds by tossing his unfilled candy bag away, hand sneaking to the nape of the elder’s neck to force him into another kiss, this one more bruising. love this
A sound of approval toils from the depths of Jonghyun’s throat, sounding lazy and gravely and it really turns Key on more than it should. LOVE THIS TOO
“I…I don’t want dirty talk tonight,” he mumbles. hurhurhur <3
“Quit what?” Key plays dumb cocky Key is kind of endearing :3
“You’re the one who wanted to be all sentimental tonight. If you wanna start monologuing, then go for it,” Key gasps, curling his fingers into a pillow above Jonghyun’s head for leverage I can't write dialogue during heated times and this is something I really envy because I love the intimacy and the comfortable-ness it implies between the people. To be so ( ... )

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:38:40 UTC
NSKDFJSDF YOUR COMMENT HAS ME SOBBING

your feels were already activated by then?? omg. ;w;

all of the parts you point out are like my favorite too okay THANK YOU SO MUCH. TTuTT I'm so happy you enjoy them. ;u;

cocky key is most definitely endearing. c:

idk maybe that's where i differ with a lot of other writers? I feel like I can't write just pure smut, or smut with little talking. i feel all uncomfortable. /squirms idek. but making them talk and interact eased me and made it easier to write. relationships where you can talk and kid even in heated times are definitely the most precious. <3 i'm so glad you appreciate it.

OH MY GOD I WAS HOPING SOMEONE WOULD NOTICE AND YOU DID AKSNFDKFHKFJD YES THAT WAS WHERE I GOT THE "I'm ready" FROM OMG I'M FLIPPING OUT RIGHT NOW. XD I didn't think anyone would notice. TEN BONUS POINTS TO YOU, MY DARLING.

yes yes have to hint at the keyhyun ;)

so glad you think so. thank you so much, your comments always mean the world to me. TTuTT thanks so much for taking the time to read. ♥

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just2wings March 3 2013, 08:46:48 UTC
yey bonus points! \o/
xD

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bestplace March 2 2013, 21:41:30 UTC
idk most of them are unfinished, you know? i don't have the motivation to finish them simply because i'm very self-conscious about my smut-writing abilities, but since your feedback is positive maybe i should finish the others, huh? XD

oh god wow thank you so much. ;w;

i'll upload more! may take some time, but i set my sights on it! thank you so much for the comment, i'm so glad you enjoyed. c': thanks for reading! ♥

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