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An Odd Taste of Nostalgia

Mar 01, 2013 16:03

Title: An Odd Taste of Nostalgia
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Smut, romance, au
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: This isn't usually what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?

( “Aish, I think you gave me carpet burn,” complains Key in sudden realization, rubbing at his back. )

jongkey, oneshot

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cuethemusicc March 1 2013, 22:14:49 UTC

OH MY GOD YOU POSTED IT
YOU POSTED THE SMUT
SPOT
YES
GOOD

bestplace March 1 2013, 22:18:46 UTC

OH GOD NOW I WISH I HADN'T I'M SO EMBARRASSED NFDJDFHDKSF

cuethemusicc March 1 2013, 23:23:08 UTC

bow chicka wow wow~
omfg you need to write smut always. or at least write jongkey always i've been craving your writing so bad ;A; i needed this. i tried to do the whole quote thing but then got distracted because smut >.>
lol at key eating all the candy i can totally imagine that xD he loves food too much hahaha. their interactions in your fics are my favorite thing.

“No, don’t stop,” Key demands, and Jonghyun tamely continues his lazy movements. “I just-this isn’t usually what…what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?” he struggles to ask in a croaky voice. i love how you subtly capture the feeling of nostalgia. like how so many things have changed since they were young and best friends... yet everything is the same? do i make sense?

“You’re so gorgeous, so, so gorgeous…” god i love pleasure drunk blabber it's my favorite

“Kiss me,” Key breathes hysterically, like those are his final words, urgency lacing his guttural tone. yes yes yes yessssss the desperation comes across well, i'm actually crying.

“You must be kidding. I…I ( ... )

cuethemusicc March 1 2013, 23:39:14 UTC

OH YEAH AND THE HINTED KEYHYUN
i totally imagine them switching a lot though jonghyun tops more because of his masculinity complex though and key because he's a needy bish

bestplace March 2 2013, 21:28:18 UTC

omg i'm really happy you like their interactions; those parts are most definitely my favorite parts to write. XD considering i love it so much, i hardly doubt i could write pure /smut/ you get my drift? there has to be conversation or i'm not comfortably idek man /shrug

yes yes you make sense. you see my goal with this, yes good. ;w;

PLEASURE DRUNK BLABBER OH GOD DON'T GET ME STARTED ;; i have a feeling we share a lot of kinks you know

lmao i like making key act very... key. XD

romantic!jonghyun cannot be helped with my writing OTL

i'm so happy you think so you don't even know. i was worried of your opinion because you were the first to see this and i just PANICKED WHEN YOU SPOTTED OMG. but i'm so glad you had a nice time reading it. thank you so much. ;u;

you hate me? it's cool, i still adore you. ;D

AND DAMN RIGHT ABOUT THE KEYHYUN!! I see them as completely versatile. /nod

thank you for approving my first posted smut bb ♥

cuethemusicc March 3 2013, 22:10:37 UTC

the fact that you enjoy them really comes across, because the interactions never feel forced in your writing which is a very nice trait to have ^^ and yeah, it's really weird to write smut with no heart in it... sometimes even pointless?

AND OMFG IKR i completely remember you telling me of your love for biting/nails on back/massages etc and I'm like omfg, are you actually me sjadfkla;

and key acting key is my favorite because i'm very obviously in love with the boy >.< also please never stop with romantic!jonghyun. i tend to fall for jonghyun in your writing *sobs ( ... )

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