An Odd Taste of Nostalgia
Title: An Odd Taste of Nostalgia
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Smut, romance, au
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: This isn't usually what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?
( “Aish, I think you gave me carpet burn,” complains Key in sudden realization, rubbing at his back. )
Pairing: JongKey
Genre: Smut, romance, au
Rating: NC-17
Word Count: 3,500
Summary: This isn't usually what kids do in a homemade tent, is it?
( “Aish, I think you gave me carpet burn,” complains Key in sudden realization, rubbing at his back. )
The younger’s lids fall shut automatically and his body stills. my feels. sorry I'm not very coherent a;lsdjflasjdf ze cute
Key responds by tossing his unfilled candy bag away, hand sneaking to the nape of the elder’s neck to force him into another kiss, this one more bruising. love this
A sound of approval toils from the depths of Jonghyun’s throat, sounding lazy and gravely and it really turns Key on more than it should. LOVE THIS TOO
“I…I don’t want dirty talk tonight,” he mumbles. hurhurhur <3
“Quit what?” Key plays dumb cocky Key is kind of endearing :3
“You’re the one who wanted to be all sentimental tonight. If you wanna start monologuing, then go for it,” Key gasps, curling his fingers into a pillow above Jonghyun’s head for leverage I can't write dialogue during heated times and this is something I really envy because I love the intimacy and the comfortable-ness it implies between the people. To be so comfortable that you can talk and kid around is just <3 I really, really like that.
free hand reaching up to cup the side of the younger’s neck, thumb pressing lightly against his Adam’s apple beautiful
Ready, ‘m ready omg I swear I heard exactly this in my head as I read it xD... OTL
“Are…Are you serious?” Key complains, following suit. He runs a hand through his sweaty hair, chest rising and falling rather hastily. “You must be kidding. I…I was being totally sexy and now you’re gonna stop? Key why you so sexy. That little description in the middle sentence. Unf. Alsfaj;dlkj;sljd. Again, the dialogue, A+
“I can’t do this,” he gripes. Love this
Key blabbers, much like he always does when getting close. The kind of detail that's much appreciated...<3
And then the KeyHyun. PERFECT. I LOVE YOU. Yes yes yes.
The smut was so full of tenderness and emotion and this is why I love your fic :3 there is nothing not to be confident about honey <3
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your feels were already activated by then?? omg. ;w;
all of the parts you point out are like my favorite too okay THANK YOU SO MUCH. TTuTT I'm so happy you enjoy them. ;u;
cocky key is most definitely endearing. c:
idk maybe that's where i differ with a lot of other writers? I feel like I can't write just pure smut, or smut with little talking. i feel all uncomfortable. /squirms idek. but making them talk and interact eased me and made it easier to write. relationships where you can talk and kid even in heated times are definitely the most precious. <3 i'm so glad you appreciate it.
OH MY GOD I WAS HOPING SOMEONE WOULD NOTICE AND YOU DID AKSNFDKFHKFJD YES THAT WAS WHERE I GOT THE "I'm ready" FROM OMG I'M FLIPPING OUT RIGHT NOW. XD I didn't think anyone would notice. TEN BONUS POINTS TO YOU, MY DARLING.
yes yes have to hint at the keyhyun ;)
so glad you think so. thank you so much, your comments always mean the world to me. TTuTT thanks so much for taking the time to read. ♥
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xD
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