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First sporking... I bring a new fandom...

Jul 08, 2008 09:48

I went to look for good B&S fanfic at the Pit (where I usually go to gawk at cringe-inducing House stories which I then MST without mercy), but should've known that was not going to be the case... Sporking in bold because it's a habit of mine.

Brothers, Sisters and Losties, a Brothers & Sisters fanfic

Summary: this fanfic involves two of my ( Read more... )

brothers & sisters, lost, texas chainsaw massacre

Comments 10

darth_firefly July 8 2008, 11:20:33 UTC

Looks like Aaron fell into a plot hole. It's just wrong. All of it's wrong.

darkangelcryo July 8 2008, 14:37:27 UTC

I think you screwed up the formatting of the links somehow because nearly all of the TCM part is in blue.

It hurts the eyes.

manekikoneko July 8 2008, 15:15:43 UTC

It's all blue because it's all link. Come close your tags, OP!

thewaughnman July 8 2008, 16:23:11 UTC

Done!

kurippu July 8 2008, 23:57:39 UTC

Kady? What kind of a name is THAT?

I know someone named Cadey... She's... annoying.

qtshorty1625 August 4 2009, 21:02:58 UTC

I don't know if anyone has said this yet, but I'm intrigued as to the fact that Jason/Kevin's kid has the last name "Walker".

I agree with you on the annoyance of misspellings of names.

I'm sure where the name WihtWhite even came from. . .

“he had and emergency at work” sarah said picking up Whit “he’ll be here soon”
I could see her saying this in annoyance. Like, he always seems to have emergencies at work. Also, it seems like there should be some sort of explanation as to the emergency/his job.

extra- extended table
I don't even know what this is. . .do they mean she put in yet another leaf? And really. . .could the room even hold another leaf put in the table? (It seems more plausible that if there were that many kids, there would be a kiddy table somewhere).

“yeah well.. I do what I can”
I can't see Sarah being this. . .egotistical. I could see Kevin saying it, especially as a joke.

well except for Alex who kept bouncing up and down her
mother’s lapMaybe it's just me, but I hate the word "well" in this context in the ( ... )

qtshorty1625 August 4 2009, 21:03:41 UTC

*I'm not sure where the name came from.

qtshorty1625 August 4 2009, 21:31:17 UTC

Sorry for all the comments from me.

I'm a little confused, because when I went to check out the fic, it said this:
Wit White (2) Sarah & Brian

Lilly Walker (3)Scotty and Kevin

Maybe they edited it so that "WitWhite" was two names and Kevin was married to Scotty and not Jason? Or I'm misreading something somewhere?