Comments | apiphile: "As soon as it's the 16th somewhere in the world, you can post your fic or art", apparently.

apiphile

"As soon as it's the 16th somewhere in the world, you can post your fic or art", apparently.

Aug 15, 2009 22:40

Title: Garden of Unearthly Delights and Minor Fuck-ups
Recipient: shadow_hive
Fandom: The Used
Word Count: 7,537
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: GSF
Warnings: Sensory deprivation, CBT, spanking, GSF
Disclaimer: This almost certainly didn't happen IRL.
Note: Author's opinions may differ from characters. Shitty writing is shitty! Betaing and exasperated yells from channonyarrow

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Comments 63

channonyarrow August 15 2009, 22:13:17 UTC

Broken HTML is broken!

Who am I kidding, by the time I post this, you'll have it.

I still sort of want to shout about this some more.

apiphile August 15 2009, 22:14:50 UTC

Indeed, it are already fixéd.

Ugh, just let it be. I posted bloody good fic just before this, the stupid shitty pornobutt waste of space story will just have to stand as testiment to how badly I do at Doing As I'm Asked, I guess.

channonyarrow August 15 2009, 22:19:44 UTC

Dude. You have fanfic of your fanfic. Even aside from the issue of original writing, etc, THIS MEANS YOU ARE DOING SOMETHING RIGHT. Continuing the trend of not knowing "write" from "right", I wrote "doing something write" of course.

But there are days when random shouting feels good. See how I worked that in there?

apiphile August 16 2009, 09:55:04 UTC

You have just inspired a new LJ name. :D

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apiphile August 16 2009, 10:05:21 UTC

I think they would be, though. He looks like the kind of man who has a dry mouth.

I JUST THINK IT COULD BE BETTER, OKAY?

strangecreature August 15 2009, 23:37:19 UTC

Gurblemurbleitishot. *G* I second what ihavecake said there, by the way. I liked the sense of danger about having Bert involved in an orgy. X-D

"Whole sentences, motherfucker, do you speak them?"

Heeeeee!

apiphile August 16 2009, 10:06:43 UTC

Bert's randomosity could lead to some terrible things, if you think about it.

strangecreature August 16 2009, 13:40:44 UTC

Especially if you've got a pillowcase over your head which was a really neat device and one I'm not entirely convinced a lot of folks could pull off properly, oh brave slightly insane Jepha.

apiphile August 16 2009, 13:41:52 UTC

I dislike blindfolds normally - apart from that fic we wrote - because they seem contrived, but the pillowcase over the head is a special kind of demeaning and, well, I like to turn Things I Really Hated In My Life into Things Which Are Really Hot, so.

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jumpthesnark August 15 2009, 23:50:26 UTC

You gave me hysterical giggles AND horniness at the same time. I salute you!

apiphile August 16 2009, 10:06:04 UTC

The two should always go together, it stops sex getting boring.

mockturtletale August 16 2009, 00:11:06 UTC

This is really really great! I like how you write them as the dirty dumb boys that they are without making it gross in a negative way, that's not something that most people manage to balance out with this band and I feel like you definitely got it spot on. The little details were lovely too, hearing Jepha concentrate on the cotton of the pillowcase and the way his thighs were straining and things like that gave the story a whole other dimension.

I enjoyed this a lot, thank you so much for posting! ♥

apiphile August 16 2009, 10:24:02 UTC

I like how you write them as the dirty dumb boys that they are without making it gross in a negative way

*g* In that case may I recommend all of swear_jar's The Used fics ever, she's the genius I learnt from, sincerely. :D :D :D

Thank you for taking the time to say so!