Kink Bingo_Masters/slaves/Doms/subs Part 3

[aleksiina_26]

Title: Control

Chapter: 3/3 [Oneshot]

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Tora x Yuki [ex-Lolita23q], Yuki x OMC, mild Tora x OFC [yup, warming up my spot in fanfic hell]

Genre: PWP

Warnings: male x male, non explicit male x female, BDSM, D/s relationships, humiliation, bondage, flogging, toy-play, exhibitionism, voyeurism, public sex, mentions of polyamory, foul

Comments

[jrockforver13]

Wow, that was quite steamy! Totally worth the wait! I can't believe how long it turned out to be! I was really surprised!

Is it strange I'm straight, but can't read straight FF? I adore malexmale, but can never read femalexmale XD I'm such a goober lol.

I really liked this one, but I feel it was a wee bit lacking on some of the details. HOWEVER, I really REALLY enjoyed it :D

[aleksiina_26]

Its monstrous! I've written bigger pieces but this one really kicked the shit out of me lol XD I'm happy you thought it was worth the wait

[jrockforver13]

I didn't mind it though! It was nice to tucker down after a long day and read a nice long fic :)

I used to be able to read het stuff, but now, I just find more fun out of yaoi. I give some het fics a try every now and then, like I gave that het fic you wrote a try, but sadly, I couldn't get through it, sowwy >.<

Well, I feel that a few parts were alittle rushed, like the rope part. I was actually looking forward to reading that part. It was still really good, I just feel it was a wee bit lacking is all :) Your English is amazing if it's your second language!

[aleksiina_26]

Ah I see. It wasn't really that I rushed it, more that the sex really wasn't the focus of this particular story. It really was more about the dominant/submissive dynamics and the emotional aspects of it than the actual sex, unlike my usual porny writing, which is why I only hinted at the bondage and sex between them and didn't really elaborate. It was more of a conscious omission than me glazing over it.

Don't worry, I might very well be writing a bongage centric fic with those two in the near future, I really love the pairing ;) Thanks for your input its well appreciated :D

[puss_nd_boots]

And THIS is why you are a very, very special writer. This piece was extraordinary - it was probably the best window you've offered yet into the often-misunderstood world of BDSM

[aleksiina_26]

*Blushes* Thank you so much :D I'm trying to break down those stereotypes, one step at a time and I think that this one was a pretty good insight overall

[sciencesaves]

Oh lord, please have mercy on my soul. *dead* X_X

[aleksiina_26]

*revives with hardcore tongue-kiss* ;)

I do hope it affected you in all the right ways, ahem...because I love to imagine it *もっこり

[xme_chanx]

DEAR GOD WHY DON'T YOU HAVE A BOOK DEAL YET????

FUck, this was amazing. It was sexy in a subtle way, but the relationships... WOW. I'd LOVE to see more in this verse. :B I love Tora explaining his past to Yuki... and the kitty ears... I nearly died. Such a beautiful way to humiliate a proud tiger. <3333

[aleksiina_26]

Just waiting to get picked up by a publishing house scout...XD I'm starting to think that maybe I should get into original fiction lol

[alohalife]

Wow, another amazing fic!!!! You know, I got really jealous at some point while reading it, but I don't know of whom I got jealous. Anyway, jealous or not I loved it, really!!!

[aleksiina_26]

Once again, I was jealous of a few people myself as I wrote it, but mostly of Yuki I think, the lucky boy...Playing pet to Tora? Sign me up! XD

I'm very glad you also enjoyed this one my dear, thanks for commenting xoxo