Kink Bingo_Masters/slaves/Doms/subs Part 3

[aleksiina_26]

Title: Control

Chapter: 3/3 [Oneshot]

Rating: NC-17

Pairing: Tora x Yuki [ex-Lolita23q], Yuki x OMC, mild Tora x OFC [yup, warming up my spot in fanfic hell]

Genre: PWP

Warnings: male x male, non explicit male x female, BDSM, D/s relationships, humiliation, bondage, flogging, toy-play, exhibitionism, voyeurism, public sex, mentions of polyamory, foul

Comments

[jrockforver13]

Wow, that was quite steamy! Totally worth the wait! I can't believe how long it turned out to be! I was really surprised!

Is it strange I'm straight, but can't read straight FF? I adore malexmale, but can never read femalexmale XD I'm such a goober lol.

I really liked this one, but I feel it was a wee bit lacking on some of the details. HOWEVER, I really REALLY enjoyed it :D

[aleksiina_26]

Its monstrous! I've written bigger pieces but this one really kicked the shit out of me lol XD I'm happy you thought it was worth the wait

[jrockforver13]

I didn't mind it though! It was nice to tucker down after a long day and read a nice long fic :)

I used to be able to read het stuff, but now, I just find more fun out of yaoi. I give some het fics a try every now and then, like I gave that het fic you wrote a try, but sadly, I couldn't get through it, sowwy >.<

Well, I feel that a few parts were alittle rushed, like the rope part. I was actually looking forward to reading that part. It was still really good, I just feel it was a wee bit lacking is all :) Your English is amazing if it's your second language!

[aleksiina_26]

Ah I see. It wasn't really that I rushed it, more that the sex really wasn't the focus of this particular story. It really was more about the dominant/submissive dynamics and the emotional aspects of it than the actual sex, unlike my usual porny writing, which is why I only hinted at the bondage and sex between them and didn't really elaborate. It was more of a conscious omission than me glazing over it.

Don't worry, I might very well be writing a bongage centric fic with those two in the near future, I really love the pairing ;) Thanks for your input its well appreciated :D

[jrockforver13]

Aaaah, after reading it again with that in mind, I get it haha. It's still a great story!

Ooh, can't wait! Again, great job!

[aleksiina_26]

I'm glad it clarified things for you :D And thanks again my dear xoxo