Kink Bingo_Masters/slaves/Doms/subs Part 3
Title: Control
Chapter: 3/3 [Oneshot]
Rating: NC-17
Pairing: Tora x Yuki [ex-Lolita23q], Yuki x OMC, mild Tora x OFC [yup, warming up my spot in fanfic hell]
Genre: PWP
Warnings: male x male, non explicit male x female, BDSM, D/s relationships, humiliation, bondage, flogging, toy-play, exhibitionism, voyeurism, public sex, mentions of polyamory, foul ( Read more... )
Okay.. wow...okay.. wait...
THIS WAS FUCKING EPIC! fdjsf9fdnsfqwo
I squealed when you wrote that you had posted this beast! Holy -shit- woman, you have no idea what kind of effect this had on my sex-deprived self (although I'm sure you could probably guess).
From the beginning: I absolutely loved the gift-giving scene. For some reason... it was like the calm before the storm, and you could feel the tension just building and building throughout the entire scene.
The way you described the soiree was simply delicious. UNF! (Again, I have no problem with well-written het, and I really, really enjoyed Kaede. この名前はちょっと珍しいけど・・・楓と言えばDir En Greyの｢楓｣ ～if trans･･･～とか松島かえでを連想してる。（笑）) I had an idea of her relationship with Tora from the moment she was introduced, and I was happy that you actually went into it a little bit there at the end.
So... do I even need to say anything about the fucking sexy-as-hell sub scene?? Good lord, woman! *brain dead and drooling*
It's so refreshing to have something like this from someone who obviously knows what she's writing about. (Recall my little jaunt into the fic world of BDSM with only minimal real life experience. *embarrassment*)
And... what are you hinting at there with the "rather famous guitarist"? HMMM?? You tease, you.
xoxo
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I do hope it affected you in all the right ways, ahem...because I love to imagine it *もっこり*
The gift scene one of the most important ones actually because it really sets the scene for the night to come but also for their entire relationship. A relationship based on trust and mutual respect and ultimately the gift of one's control. The het is minimal in terms of physical intensity but the emotional implications are huge! I have had this character outlined for a while and I was waiting for the right moment to introduce her in that verse and kink bingo just gave me the perfect opportunity to do so. Oh and 楓は、これまで私が思う私のお気に入りの名前です。lol I really love that name for some reason, its powerful XD I'm looking forward to write about her more in the threesome verse of course ;)
The sex wasn't the focus of the story, but I did make sure that the little bits we got were nice and juicy ;) And I have seen scenes like that happen in person, and let me tell you...its intense as fuck!
I might as well use all that kinky knowledge for something XD And your attempts were totally appropriate and awesome as usual, actually I would love some more bdsm from you...maybe use that kinky fucker Aki XD And of course I am referring to experiences with a certain famous band's hot, pouty lipped guitarist with a penchant for showing off his thighs...He needs a proper cameo in that verse don't you think? If anything he has a good one in my upcoming kb square hehe. Thanks for reading and commenting love xoxo
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