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Deserving Chapter 15

szaleniec1000 Oct 02, 2010 17:29

Just for a lark I tried reading one of the author's other fics. I got as far as the "sexually binding curse" that had been put on Snape by Voldemort and inherited by Harry. Yes, it's what you think it is and yes, it's so contrived it puts Deserving to shame. On which subject...

( Deserving Chapter 15 (NSFW) )

close harmony conversation, wrong word dammit, bad sex, crossover, too much information, department of redundancy department, badfic:deserving, little snakes, pov!fail, fucking self-awareness how does it work, literal butthurt, allcaps of doom, ruler, credit where it's due, incantations do not work that way, brain bleach, epithet overload, harry potter, said bookism, everybody hates harry, lube

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Dark Secrets Chapters 8-9

szaleniec1000 May 04, 2010 03:01

How much worse can this fuck-awful fanfic get? We're about to find out.
( in which true depths of badfic are plumbed )

are you a witch or not, epic fail, my preciousss, mary sue and gary stu, badfic:dark secrets, harry potter, crossover, th-s f-cking f-c s-cks, ron is evil, a sticky situation, continuity isn't optional, pov!fail, reading the books is a good idea

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