Comments | jcaddict: Out of Choices

jcaddict

Out of Choices - Chapter 32

Apr 21, 2009 23:04

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 32: Connection (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28, 29, 30, 31, 32)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count:6,729
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: An angry young woman is forced to ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 11

n7of9 April 22 2009, 12:57:35 UTC

this chapter catapulted your fic to the top for me...i am loving the shit out of this and i just 'get' it...i understand both of them, time and again i keep thinking 'yep, that's what i'd do'..i wish i could be more articulate but man that chapter has melted my brain and wet my panties (you love it!)

on a personal note, i left a few chapter reviews on ff and i wanted to thank you for replying...not many authors do and i really didn't haven't an issue with it until i realised that some actually read and reply to most - so thank you

hugs :)

jcaddict April 23 2009, 20:17:02 UTC

Cool! I like the idea of being catapulted LOL. Seriously though, thank you. I'm so glad that you're loving the shit out of it. That makes me giddy! You do get it, the same way I do. *nods* You've being very articulate Hun. I get what you're saying very succinctly.

I read a post in a forum about authors replying to reviews. I will admit up to that point I probably replied to every third chapter of reviews, certainly some of the time but not all the time. I'm pretty sure most of the authors were lying about replying to everything but it got me thinking. I ask for reviews after every chapter. How can I expect people to review without replying to them? So I started replying to everyone. I went back and replied to every review that I was capable of replying to. It was important to me to let people know that I appreciate the feedback.

I will happily accept the label of "fiction writer who melts brains and causes wet panties." ;o) Of course it's completely not my fault. It's Edward's LOL.

passion1kiss April 23 2009, 00:10:28 UTC

That was torturous!! Very good in writing this chapter, it was very yummy<3...But please, please-don't wait too long in releasing the next one. I felt like someone just hit the light switch on before it was getting down to the more juicy stuff,lol!!! Thanks again

jcaddict April 23 2009, 20:25:44 UTC

Torturous? I was hoping it might be pleasurable LOL. I am always writing so hopefully the next chapter won't take too long. This one took me five days, but I'm not making any promises. Thanks for the comment.

susieqtaj143 April 23 2009, 19:37:57 UTC

sher, you are a goddess!how sexy was that in slow detail!he gave her what every woman wants, to be loved nice and slow, without wondering when he's getting his!!ha ha much love!!

jcaddict April 23 2009, 20:27:16 UTC

I haven't been called a goddess in so long. I adore that word LOL. Thanks so much Babe! I guess that's what sets Edward apart from other men, giving without worrying about the gains LOL. I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

ashley_luvs_gab April 23 2009, 21:34:21 UTC

i haven't read yet, but the A/N about earning the rating made me grin. does that make me aperv? bahaha

jcaddict May 4 2009, 14:17:35 UTC

No I don't think it makes you a perv, then again I wrote it LOL. Let's just agree to not call each other pervs, deal? ;o)

hairsprayx12 April 25 2009, 02:29:39 UTC

Whoa!!!!

So beautiful...of course I expected no less from you Sher.

You know what I love about this? Besides that it was hot?

Once again it was all about their connection. It wasn't just sex, it wasn't just hormones raging, it wasn't just scratching an itch...hell it wasn't even the inevitable...

It was about being together...it was about connecting once again...this time without words...it was about expressing their love but also proving to each other that they fit...that one is for the other...that it isn't some emotion that will fade with time...it's bigger then both of them...and once they make love...all bets are off

Okay...I'm a dork...

So...I liked it :P

jcaddict May 4 2009, 14:28:47 UTC

I don't think you're a dork at all Lo. I think it's awesome that you can read it and feel all of the things you told me about. I don't want to sound full of myself but I write with the intention of making the reader feel something, or try to. I'm sure there are many it doesn't come across to but to the few that it does, people like you, it makes me very proud. So yes, I wanted you to feel the heat but also the love and the connection that transcends their bodies. You got it exactly right Lo.