Out of Choices - Chapter 28

[jcaddict]

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 28: Acceptance (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2, 23, 24, 25, 26, 27, 28)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count: 6,380
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: An angry young woman is forced to move to the

Comments

[dawntwilight000]

Love the chapter. Bella's reaction was great. You sure makes those kisses hot. I had a feeling that Edward was talking to Carlisle about sex, but I wanted you to verify it. I'm sneaky like that! I loved the talk with Dad. The fact that he was open and took Edwards feeling into account was great. Boy, I can't wait to you write that chapter! Oh, and the one when Bella find out that he's not human. I think she doesn't think she's quit human herself. Anyway, I'm glad you updated I was have withdrawls from you story!

[jcaddict]

Yeah he was talking to Carlisle about sex. You know me Dawn, sex is always on my mind LOL. Kidding, sort of :op No, Edward wanted a chance to tell Esme and Carlisle about Bella, as well as sort of get the opinion of someone he trusts about physically loving Bella. And of course Carlisle can't resist being the Dad and talk about it from all angles...giving Edward a few things to think about. You're looking forward to the lemon chapter? And the vamp chap? Hmmm... ;o) I'm so thankful for all of your support on this story. I'm so glad you enjoy it!

[susieqtaj143]

hey, hows it going?i really love this chapter a lot of course!edward talking to his dad was priceless.it shows the full emotion and love that he has for her, and that he wants to go to him to talk about it just like any other kid, even tho he isn't just like any other kid!i am so looking forward to where thid is going, and how he is eventually going to tell her that he is a vampire!great writing as always! and much love to you!!!

[jcaddict]

Thanks Suse! I enjoyed writing the Carlisle conversation, although I wasn't sure I went far enough with the discussion. Part of me feels like I'm going to blow it with some readers with the leeway I take in the physical relationship, and I wonder if I should have made the warning from Carlisle more stern or explicit. Then again, I'm having one of those weeks where I doubt every decision I make so ignore me and carry on with your day LOL. Thanks always for your support Susie. You bring sunshine to my day so often.

[lokilady]

Don't worry so much! You're doing an awesome job! Looking forward to more.

[jcaddict]

Thanks Hun! Your comment made me laugh out loud. I'm a worrier. I worry ;o) I'm so glad you're enjoying the story!!!

[lokilady]

Me too. I wrote a story once and it stressed me half to death. Now I just read stories.

[jcaddict]

I'm sorry to hear that it stressed you out, but I understand what you mean LOL.

[optimistic4ever]

Wow Sher, this chapter having the discussion between Edward and Carlisle was everything I had hoped it would be. I wanted Edward to be able to have an honest and open conversation with his parents, and he was able to do that. I was glad that Esme left the men to be alone when she did. All she really needed to know was Edward's feelings toward Bella anyhow. Carlisle did right by telling Edward to take things slowly and telling him that a physical relationship was possible. He is being careful when it comes to his family, and he is telling Edward not to forget about their safety as well. He knows that Edward is going to have to tell Bella the entire truth about himself, and in all reality, it is probably better to be done sooner than later. I am really looking forward to the chapter where he tells her the truth finally! I can't wait to see how she handles that kind of news. Great job as always! *HUG* One last thing though.....I love the fact that Edward's conversation took place as a flashback during Biology. It just goes to