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Out of Choices - Chapter 23

Mar 03, 2009 00:09

Title: Out Of Choices
Chapter 23: Turnabout (Previous Chapters: 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11, 12, 13, 14, 15, 16, 17, 18, 19.1, 19.2, 20, 21, 22.1, 22.2)
Author:JCAddict/picklewinkle/Sher
Fandom: Twilight
Word Count: 5,364
Rating: R/M, for sex and language
Story Summary: An angry young woman is forced to move to the town of Forks, Washington ( Read more... )

ooc, twilight, fanfiction

Comments 3

hairsprayx12 March 9 2009, 00:13:37 UTC

I love that she is opening up toward him and he is such a goner for her

jcaddict March 13 2009, 18:05:05 UTC

Tee hee. He is a goner for her. It's fun for me to break her wide open and poke around in her guts since she's so complicated.

optimistic4ever January 23 2010, 02:07:33 UTC

Wonderful chapter Sher. Bella is finally opening up to Edward. I love the fact that she is willing to be so open with her emotions and thoughts now. She knows that he is head over heels in love with her, so hiding anything would just be stupid on her part. I just about jumped for joy when he told her that he wouldn't miss the opportunity to kiss her just because of her morning breath.

However, with the good, we have to be willing to have the bad. It may not be bad, but from Bella's viewpoint, it is. Only because she can't read minds. What is the deal with Alice? Is she still picturing Edward carrying a dead Bella in his arms? Is this the reason that she is acting the way that she is? She has made Bella feel bad in some way, and now Edward is upset. However, we have a wonderful 4 hour drive to look forward to reading about. I can't wait Sher. Great job as always!