Comments | zombieboyband: alternaverse, ho! Blink: Part 1

zombieboyband

alternaverse, ho! Blink: Part 1

Dec 14, 2010 00:36

This is one of those times I wish my brain could just okay the skip to the fleshy parts? But NO. My brain is like, HERE, HAVE SOME EXPOSITION. I don't know; it's not like I don't love plotless violence and sex from other people... I probably could've finished this tonight except that I wasted two hours of my life looking through Gerard Way pictures ( Read more... )

batfic, fic: blink, prompts, earth 3, fic, owlman, batman, batman/owlman, au

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endcredits December 15 2010, 21:04:38 UTC

Oh, dude, lovely! I'm so giddy that you've riffed off my little snippet of a plot-bunny and let it unfold into this. Can I hire you as my personal scribe? ;) *feeds you (vegetarian) bunnies*

Even an absence of a couple of days makes the city bleed, makes it pale and weak with the need to please him
soggy and dirty like a paper castle kicked into a puddle

Beautiful imagery. Oh, Owlman, you crazy, crazy bastard. I love that Gotham's putridity is a symptom of something dirty for Batman to cleanse, and something weak for Owlman to crush. And I really like your use of past for Bruce at the beginning, and present for Owlman's narrative-it's like, WHAM, alternative universe! Welcome to Owlman's brain!

I can't wait to read more. Bat meet Owl = FIGHT!

zombieboyband December 15 2010, 21:27:06 UTC

Between this and the Santa prompt, which I can easily see hitting 30+ pages eventually, with the ponderous fucking way I write this fandom, I feel like I kind of am acting as your personal scribe. Apparently I will work for offers of tea and biscuits ( ... )

endcredits December 18 2010, 18:35:14 UTC

Hee. More biscuits?

I can well imagine Bat/Owl sexytiems being incredibly difficult to write. I find it hard enough to prod Batman and Joker together into an uncompromising situation without either of them veering wildly OOC, so Batman and his own evil alter-ego? Yikes. I mean, I know they call him Bruce Vain, but ... heh. [WHY IS THE IDEA SO HOT, THOUGH? MY BRAIN IS BROKEN.]

It's never poor form to laugh at your own work! Especially when it involves batarangs-they're just inherently hilarious. And don't get me started on owlarangs. :D

zombieboyband December 18 2010, 20:01:01 UTC

BRUCE VAIN, HOW COULD I HAVE FORGOTTEN, OH MY LORD. THANK YOU.

I totally wrote the sex! There were totally orgasms! I totally wrote it at 3 AM last night and I woke up today and looked it over and went: D: "That's not dun-con, that's TOTALLY non con! SO MUCH BLOOD." D: D: D:

So now I'm kind of eh on if I should post or rewrite or what. /throws hands up in the air

Batman and the Joker are oh so hard to get to getting it on without OOCness or a major disaster (zombies! both of them in arkham!), but at least they have a history. Bat/Owl has to happen quickly...I kind of think a situation where they both know OF each other (possibly through Joker/Jokester, because I assume dimension hopping is one of those things that just HAPPENS to them sometimes) might work better. Oh well. I might reboot the idea three months from now or something, hah.

I KIND OF LOVE THAT OWLMAN CAN CONSTANTLY TALK SHIT. At least my Owlman is all, "bats? pffft. LOSER."

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