The Gang: Chapter 3 - Second Thoughts

Aug 24, 2012 22:00

ZeldaQueen: Before we begin, warnings! This chapter contains urine drinking, and not in the narmy, silly way done in My Inner Life!
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nsfw, the fic: the gang, guest sporker: raxis, second thoughts, suethor: neil, chapter 3, cosporking

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chibi_regalli August 26 2012, 04:48:10 UTC
... So, ah, I'm just gonna scream now. Forever.

Urine drinking rituals. Of course. Just from the oath alone I can tell this one's worse than My Inner Life. At least that one had some twisted, insane logic to it.

Just wondering, how old is this thing and when was it last updated? I'm wondering what the odds are of it continuing past seven chapters. I don't even want to imagine how Neil writes an actual rape scene... *shudders*

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zelda_queen August 29 2012, 03:38:22 UTC
I think it has gone without updates for a month or so at least. I really don't think Neil's going to post more of this.

...Hopefully. 8(

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chibi_regalli August 29 2012, 03:43:53 UTC
We can dream. WE CAN DREAM.

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katistrophe June 29 2013, 15:49:25 UTC
Then… well, then he’d be part of the gang, and he’d just have to wait for the first opportunity to strip a girl. He wasn’t religious, not in any sense, but he silently begged God that it would be today.
All right. The rage is back. Dear gods, is it back. I'm not religious at all and that sounds horribly wrong to me. "Please, God, let me ogle an underage girl."

All three of them were smiling at him in a warm and welcoming way. There didn’t appear to be anything sinister in the room, or in their smiles, everything seemed very friendly.
And then they offered him tea, which smelled faintly of bitter almonds.

“I’m Emily”
DIE, SUE, DIE!!!

So you’ll have to do as you’re told. If you don’t do as you’re told you’ll be punished.”
Do I want to know what that punishment entails? ... I don't. I know I don't.

It didn’t seem too bad. Some chores to do, couldn’t be much, and he’d have to make sure he didn’t do anything wrong, didn’t warrant any kind of punishment. On the other hand: naked girls.Fuck you. You're twelve. You shouldn't be ( ... )

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