Ah God - so close, and still so very far away from getting out of these damn woods! Excellent, as always. Loved that Kathleen was going to get Dean's boot. Perfect.
I love that too… it’s so *her* and so *her* to mention it too, after all that has happened. She is a woman after my own heart. In fact I think I have a straight crush on my version of Kathleen.
I predict that he’s going to be pretty pissed off about it… >:)
I think I just spent the last two days reading this and the story before hand. Which has been oodles of help for my homework. But damn if you don't write an amazing story that will be worth every second I don't sleep to catch up on my assignments. I hope you don't keep us hanging for long because I seriously need to put off more homework with this fantastic story.
Well, thanks muchly, hon! Though now I feel totally responsible for the bags under your eyes and your poor grades! Must do assignments first, you hear me?! Only one more chapter of this to go, sadly, but there will be a new story in the 'verse in the new year, so be sure to track me. I'm really glad you've enjoyed the ride! ;-)
A very spiffy chapter indeed! ; ) I really appreciated the powerful imagery. The description of Dean's fury, for instance. I think my favorite parts were:
- Bobby being disappointed he missed out on Kathleen being tossed out of the pit. - The line "And he goes rigid again, flexes up so high now he’s on his heels and his head, the rest of him clear off the ground, and all she can do is crouch down and talk him through it." - And this line, or this wording, amused me "because Pa Bender knew how to brew up hooch like no man and this is ten-thousand-proof Martian rocket fuel," I think that was my favorite line in the whole chapter, in fact. ; )
Actually I think I may have been drinking ten-thousand-proof Martian rocket fuel when I wrote that line! Hmmmm... my favorite line in that chapter is "Silver's a fuckin' bitch", for some reason. It just *tickles* me... >:)
*hehe* Yeah that was a good moment too. I'm really keen to see how you wrap this adventure up in the next chapter. No rushing though, you hear me! (Not saying that you rush your writing, just saying I don't want you to start doing so just because I or somebody else gets antsy.) : )
I read the first story last night, and got as far as chapter 5 of this one before I really did have to go to sleep. I thought I would read a couple more chapters over a cup of tea this morning whilst my 2 year old watched a video.
It's now 1pm and I haven't moved all morning. This has just been an incredible ride. I can't wait to see how you get them out of the woods. Do they meet up again with Booth and Bones?
Wow. It is one of the best written stories I have read recently. I recently started reading a book that was about haunted houses and ghost hunters; I gave up after about 5 chapters because the writing was not up to the standard of the fanfic I have read over the last couple of months, and this is one of the best.
Rambling a bit, but I hope you get the picture - I really liked this!
Wow: thanks muchly! Both of these stories have been a real labor of love for me and that makes comments like yours even more special. What amazes me most about what you've said though is that your 2-year-old sat still for that long... WOW! Can I assume chocolate chip cookies were in the mix somewhere?
Last chapter of tis is due to post this weekend but there will be another story in the 'verse in the New Year so be sure to track me! And thanks again for taking the time...
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I predict that he’s going to be pretty pissed off about it… >:)
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I hope you don't keep us hanging for long because I seriously need to put off more homework with this fantastic story.
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I really appreciated the powerful imagery. The description of Dean's fury, for instance.
I think my favorite parts were:
- Bobby being disappointed he missed out on Kathleen being tossed out of the pit.
- The line "And he goes rigid again, flexes up so high now he’s on his heels and his head, the rest of him clear off the ground, and all she can do is crouch down and talk him through it."
- And this line, or this wording, amused me "because Pa Bender knew how to brew up hooch like no man and this is ten-thousand-proof Martian rocket fuel," I think that was my favorite line in the whole chapter, in fact. ; )
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I thought I would read a couple more chapters over a cup of tea this morning whilst my 2 year old watched a video.
It's now 1pm and I haven't moved all morning. This has just been an incredible ride. I can't wait to see how you get them out of the woods. Do they meet up again with Booth and Bones?
Wow. It is one of the best written stories I have read recently. I recently started reading a book that was about haunted houses and ghost hunters; I gave up after about 5 chapters because the writing was not up to the standard of the fanfic I have read over the last couple of months, and this is one of the best.
Rambling a bit, but I hope you get the picture - I really liked this!
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Last chapter of tis is due to post this weekend but there will be another story in the 'verse in the New Year so be sure to track me! And thanks again for taking the time...
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