To jump to Real life for a second, Egypt re-writes the story book on this one. Hatshepsut imprisoned the next in line for the throne (possibly while Regent, I forget) because she thought he'd be an awful awful King, and ruled Egypt for like 15-20 years. History generally agrees that she was a pretty good Queen. Then the guy she imprisoned takes the throne...and is a pretty good king.
Yeah, it's like "I got her half of the story and RE-WROTE EVERYTHING BECAUSE SHE HAS NO IDEA HOW TO WRITE GOD. WHAT'S WITH HER TRYING TO BE IMPORTANT NOW SHE'S OVER 18. CAN'T YOU SEE SHE'S THE ANTAGONIST IN MY STORY (I may have added some parts for dramatic effect)
Hmmmm...I was about to say that good old Queen Elizabeth would have had a thing or two to say about this, too, but given that she spent most of her reign alternatively apologizing for and rejecting her femininity...yeah. Her whole schtick was something like "I may have the weak body of a female, but I have the heart of a MAN
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I don't know how professional collabs work either but just from doing fan collabs it seems in poor taste to just diss your collaborater publically like that for sucking. SEEMS A BIT TACKY IS ALL
ooo from glancing at the back of the book to see how long it is, I caught a glimpse of sections that might be about what each of them thought/contributed to the book. :O WE MAY KNOW HOW LACKEY FEELS ABOUT ALL THIS YET
Her last name is Harmonia? Now all I can picture is a Mary Sue, but with the hair and ballcap of N from Pokemon Black&White, as apparently his last name is also Harmonia.
"I would free all the Pokemon from human tyranny, but I am far too childlike and weak-willed to do so, if only there was a mustachio'd strong man to tell me what to do!"
SADLY IT TURNS OUT SHE MIGHT ACTUALLY HAVE A DIFFERENT LAST NAME FOR SOME REASON it's something like elibetina or something after her mom WHICH IS MUCH MORE BORING
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Yeah, it's like "I got her half of the story and RE-WROTE EVERYTHING BECAUSE SHE HAS NO IDEA HOW TO WRITE GOD. WHAT'S WITH HER TRYING TO BE IMPORTANT NOW SHE'S OVER 18. CAN'T YOU SEE SHE'S THE ANTAGONIST IN MY STORY (I may have added some parts for dramatic effect)
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ooo from glancing at the back of the book to see how long it is, I caught a glimpse of sections that might be about what each of them thought/contributed to the book. :O WE MAY KNOW HOW LACKEY FEELS ABOUT ALL THIS YET
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"I would free all the Pokemon from human tyranny, but I am far too childlike and weak-willed to do so, if only there was a mustachio'd strong man to tell me what to do!"
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WHICH IS MUCH MORE BORING
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