Comments | yume_to_ame: Temporary Forever (Juntoshi)

lilly0 in yume_to_ame

Temporary Forever (Juntoshi)

Oct 26, 2012 14:40

Title: Temporary Forever
Pairing: Juntoshi, guest-appearances by Nino, Sho, Aiba.
Rating: PG-15
One-shot
Genre: romance, bit angst, bit humour
Summary: Tired of all the silence between them and all the arguing, Jun and Ohno decide that they need to find the core of the problem in their relationship. They've been together since years after all... How ( Read more... )

r: pg-15, l: one-shot, genre: angst, genre: humour, p: matsumoto jun/ohno satoshi, genre: romance

Comments 16

lilly0 October 26 2012, 12:40:56 UTC

SPOT for sesquerdo

sesquerdo October 27 2012, 00:28:00 UTC

First of all, thank you again for accepting my request and for writing Juntoshi for me ( ... )

lilly0 October 29 2012, 17:09:19 UTC

Thanks so much for your awesome comment!! I'm so happy that you liked this story!!
Actually I tried a new approach for this, so I hope you enjoyed reading it! ♥
I'm also glad that you didn't mind the other guys lurking around in this fic and being helpful, or almost helpful :D

*huggles*

PS: Don't worry about the other story. I'll be happily awaiting your feedback <3
Oh, and not to forget that there is still a request from you in my old request post ^^

eiko_lotus October 26 2012, 13:23:21 UTC

Thanks for sharing, it always please to read a juntoshi fic. ^_^

lilly0 October 27 2012, 14:10:20 UTC

Thanks so much for your lovely comment! I'm really glad you liked it! ♥

nijimirai October 26 2012, 15:20:01 UTC

*A* i loved it! it's so nice! ok please don't take this the wrong way, but what i like about it was that it didn't give me too intense negative feelings at the negative parts. for example, in the story, when Jun and Ohno were experiencing their problems, i liked it that it didn't make me feel extremely sad/"oh dear" kind of feelings.

and i smiled a lot at the little funny parts in between :D

thank you so much for sharing~!!<3

lilly0 October 28 2012, 08:23:55 UTC

Thanks so much for your awesome comment!!!! I'm really happy that you liked it! And I'm glad that the negative parts weren't too crushing - that's what I actually intended. ♥

yun_miyake October 26 2012, 15:36:55 UTC

kuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu thanks for this
I like the last part, when Ohno wanted to change his passive-possessive-jealously into something, like leaving a mark on Jun kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa >///< I wish he really did in the real life ^^

lilly0 October 28 2012, 08:24:48 UTC

Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! *huggles*
I'm really glad that you liked it!!

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lilly0 October 28 2012, 08:25:24 UTC

Thanks so much for reading and commenting!! ♥ I'm really glad that you liked it!!