Temporary Forever (Juntoshi)

Oct 26, 2012 14:40

Title: Temporary Forever
Pairing: Juntoshi, guest-appearances by Nino, Sho, Aiba.
Rating: PG-15
One-shot
Genre: romance, bit angst, bit humour
Summary: Tired of all the silence between them and all the arguing, Jun and Ohno decide that they need to find the core of the problem in their relationship. They've been together since years after all... How ( Read more... )

r: pg-15, l: one-shot, genre: angst, genre: humour, p: matsumoto jun/ohno satoshi, genre: romance

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sweetspicyhot October 26 2012, 16:56:46 UTC
Thank for this. I like the roller coaster here. I like that even when they are fighting there are moments when they still appreciate the other one--like when Ohno comes home and gives Jun the massage.

I like that they have friends that they can talk to.

I like that sorry isn't enough--most especially when the problem isn't resolved.

The part with Aiba's book was awesome--don't we all have a book like that somewhere? Ha ha

But my favorite part was when they discussed fighting in front of their friends. I love how they wanted to shield their relationship a bit, and communicate with each other.

Thanks again :D

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lilly0 October 28 2012, 09:00:46 UTC
I'm so happy you read this story!! Thanks so much, my friend!! ♥

I really had a good time writing this - Juntoshi is so ♥♥♥ And I tried to settle for something new here and make Ohno a bit more... wary, with doubts. Just like every other person.

Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! <3

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yukitsubute October 28 2012, 08:42:53 UTC
I totally loved the idea that Ohno is jealous here. Because of Aiba...*lol* But, hey, it's not easy if you feel like this. It really can ruin a relationship, especially when you aren't talking about it. ><

Ahhhh Ohno making his territory. *lol* Jun is a perfect tree ^^ *giggles*

Jun has some weak points sometimes, right?! Poor him where he cried. >< But I think Ohno is more shocked about it....he doesn't count with that, right?!

Ohno and a Jun tattoo on his arm????? XDDDDD Oh please, can he do this? I would never stop laughing....and I want to see Sho's face then. ^^

Thanks sooo much for sharing this, I totally enjoyed reading it. <3

*hugs*

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lilly0 November 1 2012, 09:41:36 UTC
Thanks so much for your lovely comment, dear!! <3
I'm glad you liked this!!

Poor Ohno, he really had a hard time fighting his jealousy here. >< But he got everything under control again <3

I'm glad you also liked their fun and casual moments
Actually I had really a lot of fun writing that. ^_^

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sufiyah November 4 2012, 10:29:22 UTC
It was a really good fanfic...<3

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lilly0 November 5 2012, 13:02:29 UTC
Thanks so much for your lovely comment!! ♥♥

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